Recent Comments

10/13/20, 4:22 PM
read it only once and I love it. It's actually a great story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/13/20, 3:46 PM
I have read this story several times before posting & I have to say it is something I would really enjoy happening to me (if somebody was that interested in me). Great job & I look forward to it being continued. Perhaps with a second volunteer?
10/13/20, 2:34 PM
I love it 💙 been more realistic is something I like on this... I can't wait for the next chapter with the results of this :3 To Martin: quick question... if I write a story with some violence and also blood and death, that could be approved??? (asking because are some aspects of one of the stories I have in mind for the Halloween challenge)
Martin
10/13/20, 1:40 PM
I did approve it, didn't I? I'm fully aware that my uneasiness is at least partially hypocritical. The fact that he's kidnapped and subdued using very real violence and a drug, but especially, the fact that he's basically lobotomized, is what really disturbs me. It's a tad bit too close to reality and too violent for my taste. But again, this is just my taste, this is the comment section, which is meant for sharing opinions, and even though I'm the admin/owner, I'm entitled to have an opinion of my own, am I not? 😆
Anonymous
10/13/20, 1:35 PM
Hot story! It reminds me of the art of Troubled's Growing Pandemic.
Anonymous
10/13/20, 1:23 PM
I think I'll have to disagree with Martin in this. I actually enjoyed the story a lot and I don't see how it is different from any story on this website. All stories essentially deal with the idea of forcing people to mostly perform sexual acts against their will which in itself can be considered "horrible, violent and despicable". So what are the stories the admins don't have to struggle to publish ?
Martin
10/13/20, 12:22 PM
I want to be honest here, I struggled with the decision whether I should approve this or not. The acts described here are horrible, violent and despicable. However, same is true for many other fantasies on this site, so it would feel hypocritical to me to draw an arbitrary line here. Let's just say that this fantasy is not mine and doesn't turn me on in the slightest. But other people might feel different about it, for sure.
10/13/20, 11:55 AM
Forgotten cradle any thing you wanted added?
Jan 15, 2019
Anonymous
10/13/20, 10:53 AM
This was an amazing start, I can't wait to see where it goes.
nobody
10/13/20, 8:38 AM
It's pretty good.... but it feels a bit.. underdeveloped? the transformation happens while sleeping and not a lot of detail is given, and the mind control bit just.... happens with no struggle. the concept is good but it needs more detail