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Anonymous
10/13/20, 1:35 PM
Hot story! It reminds me of the art of Troubled's Growing Pandemic.
Anonymous
10/13/20, 1:23 PM
I think I'll have to disagree with Martin in this. I actually enjoyed the story a lot and I don't see how it is different from any story on this website. All stories essentially deal with the idea of forcing people to mostly perform sexual acts against their will which in itself can be considered "horrible, violent and despicable". So what are the stories the admins don't have to struggle to publish ?
Martin
10/13/20, 12:22 PM
I want to be honest here, I struggled with the decision whether I should approve this or not. The acts described here are horrible, violent and despicable. However, same is true for many other fantasies on this site, so it would feel hypocritical to me to draw an arbitrary line here. Let's just say that this fantasy is not mine and doesn't turn me on in the slightest. But other people might feel different about it, for sure.
10/13/20, 11:55 AM
Forgotten cradle any thing you wanted added?
Jan 15, 2019
Anonymous
10/13/20, 10:53 AM
This was an amazing start, I can't wait to see where it goes.
nobody
10/13/20, 8:38 AM
It's pretty good.... but it feels a bit.. underdeveloped? the transformation happens while sleeping and not a lot of detail is given, and the mind control bit just.... happens with no struggle. the concept is good but it needs more detail
10/13/20, 8:31 AM
A new challenger approches! Poor caesar, he missed a chance to redeem...
Author
10/13/20, 8:10 AM
Zapper350: Thank you so much! I would have liked more exposition about the other JL members (I planned to initially; just needed to get back to my day job (that actually pays :-) ). Unless the mare flash transformed into is infertile, I am sure it/she will bear a colt. I don't think they will turn back, my current 'head canon' is that they are lost indefinitely in body and mind. However, feel free to have your own head canon on it :-). The thing with evil viruses (or evil virus-makers) is that they are random. Flash going with GL or batman might have made more sense romantically, but it's not about romance in this case :-). I may write stories where GL turns in a donkey and Batman+Wonderwoman in a pair of cows (as was the plan before my time was up), if I have the time. The concept in my head is more or less that the Sarcovians lied about antropomorphic animals, the virus will turn everyone in full animals. Other planets or alternate earths may succumb to other unfortunate fates.
10/13/20, 5:30 AM
thought this was really hot, look forward to seeing where the bros go to with their workout room. kudos
boi98229
10/13/20, 5:21 AM
Yes, like mycockslave3, the previous reader, i am very ready for this as well. i need to belong to an Alpha like Adam. i typically go into trance 3-5 times per week. i am practicing for when 'Adam' comes for me, and happily i am becoming more and more easily taken into trance. Needless to say then, this story was perfect for me, and hotter than hot! The extent to which Adam had already been feeling so strongly about owning Dale and was already to go that far so quickly was definitely a surprise. i am hoping for a similar surprise in reality. Thanks so much for connecting and conjuring my own dream so clearly.