Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/12/20, 4:07 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!
Oct 11, 2020
10/12/20, 3:57 AM
Phenomenal <3
Oct 11, 2020
Drake Nightstrom
10/12/20, 1:49 AM
From what I read so far this is an amazing story. Keep going!
10/12/20, 12:44 AM
Please continue this as a series.....what becomes of the brotherhood? Who is this mysterious entity at the end? Why are they in opposition?
10/11/20, 11:23 PM
such good Jack off material! I would do without the epilogue but still loved it.
10/11/20, 11:04 PM
fun story, though it didn't seem the pandemic was too relevant.
10/11/20, 9:49 PM
hotttt. i really like this story. hope there is more.
10/11/20, 9:40 PM
While not the finale of the series, this in the conclusion of enslaving Beast Muscle Show. Next stories would be using Frank to add other muscle hunks to our hero's slave force. Feel free to post comments and suggesting, though I make no promises to include them, I will read and am happy to get inspiration! The next addition will be someone else who appeared on the BMS's channel (link in first chapter), can you guess who? Will probably be much longer until next chapter, just a heads up.
Anonymous
10/11/20, 9:34 PM
In part it’s not a theme that interests me, but it also felt like there was very little connection between the two halves of the story. You do all this great set up about the heroes being seduced and brought under Sarcovian control, and then suddenly we’re presented with a totally different direction and set of characters. It feels like they could both be expanded to great stories in their own niche, but together they didn’t really gel as a single piece (for me, anyway!) All that said, I love the ideas in that first half so I’d definitely be interested in reading what you come up with next! Y’know, once the anonymity goes away and we can see who wrote what :)
Author
10/11/20, 9:22 PM
Thank you for the feedback: Just so I can try to improve: is animal TF just not your thing (would make sense on this website, since it's on the edge of the main genre here)? Or is it poorly written? Or do you have an opinion on both questions? Thank you so much!