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10/11/20, 9:51 AM
Awesome story! Well thought through, I enjoyed the whole thing. Would read more chapters, should you feel inspired...
10/11/20, 9:36 AM
I think there's probably an interesting idea in here somewhere, but between all the spelling errors and formatting errors, I found this story almost impossible to read.
10/11/20, 9:27 AM
This story is trying to pack in a lot of different ideas and a lot of world-building. At the beginning, it has so much exposition, it felt a little tedious, but I was glad I stuck with it, because I enjoyed a lot of the bonkers sexual action that came next (even the bestiality scenes).
10/11/20, 8:35 AM
Awesome story. Love the idea of a hot stud like Tim with a tight pussy!
Sexcrab
10/11/20, 8:28 AM
A must-in, delicious story! Classic and hot. And although it doesn't seem like an obligation (the story seems to be a oneshot for me), the three characters had different personalities and very well written. Keep writing!
10/11/20, 6:29 AM
i really loved this chapter. can't wait for more.
Anonymous
10/11/20, 6:17 AM
Hot, although if he has mystical all purpose nanites, why cant he use them on his legs?..
10/11/20, 4:48 AM
I enjoyed this one a lot--you can't go wrong with that classic "one guy gets taken over, then recruits his friends" structure.
10/11/20, 3:56 AM
Good story premise, although I thought it jumped a little too quickly from Day 7 (where the narrator is uncomfortable with nudity) to Day 13 (where the narrator is always naked and openly jerking off in front of his roommate). I also didn't really like the shift to a second narrator at the end; I think the story works much better when the master is a shadowy presence worshipped by Jonah and Russell, and I had no interest learning about his motivations.
10/11/20, 3:53 AM
I'm really excited to read this when it continues!