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1/14/25, 2:29 PM
Love me a good transformation story, and this series delivered from start to finish! Just the right amount of exposition and then you jumped right into the smut. Good writing!
1/14/25, 12:49 PM
We NEED part two! šŸ”„šŸ”„
Anonym
1/14/25, 10:28 AM
A very fun chapter! I found it kinda hard to keep up with all the new characters (especially ones I don't know) but it all comes together nicely. Personally Shadow Demon might be my favorite from this bunch of henchmen. Also, idk if I said this already, but I love how the Lost Boys interact with each other. I'm looking very much forward to seeing the next chapter... wonder how Mastermind will finish. Especially now that he may have revealed a weakness? Hehe
Anonym
1/14/25, 9:12 AM
(Oh man, I forgot to comment when I read this story the first time, whoops) That was such a hot chapter. Loved the three new boys that were added. Their supervillian counterparts were also really fun. (Favorite has to be Reynbow. Such a hot idea) I liked this chapter so much that I got Xenoblade 1. Just something I thought I'd share :)
1/14/25, 8:39 AM
Oooh, a conspiracy is afoot! I’m excited. 232’s conversion was just the hook eh?
1/14/25, 7:31 AM
Sign. Me. Up!
1/14/25, 7:31 AM
Thoroughky enjoy your writing.
1/14/25, 2:39 AM
loved this, can't wait for the next day
1/14/25, 2:03 AM
Another awesome chapter- happy to see you continuing this! Can't help but feel bad for Tyson a bit, seeing how far he's fallen.
Anon
1/13/25, 11:31 PM
Paul is really getting himself into a fine mess isn't he ( I probably shouldn't call it a mess as it isn't right now but there are so many ways this could go wrong.). It's always so interesting to see how outsiders see the character's we've seen. He's right to be wary of Toddson, and it's interesting to see his discussion with Ray- though why did Ray close those curtains? And then there's whatever is going on between him and Ruiz in time. And that mysterious message about his pictures is another thing to- what's up with that? Have we got another situation like the FBI agent going on? Yeah I don't know what Yousef's plan was in just stopping to call his family but that evidently backfired- as it should. HIs family seems very close to each other so they would have reached out. Though I thought it was his grandfather that was the mondjugen, not his dad. That's going to make things so complicated- at worst case this could arguably break Yousef's family irreparably if the wolves find out about his dad being a mondjugen- the one thing Yousef likely fears- he likely kept his calls on decreasing amounts to keep his family safe from all of this. That talk between him and his dad is going to be....tense. And it's interesting to see how his dynamic with Bill will evolve. Though I do hope Yousef doesn't wind up seeing his relationship to his dad (or even his family in general at worst) imploding.

1/14/25, 2:02 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) I did describe Mo as a grandfather during his introductory scene (because his other sons have kids). He is Yousef's father. I apologize if my prose caused confusion. Glad you are enjoying the chapter. I am having such fun with all this. I've really happy it is keeping peoples' interest.