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AgingAthlete
10/11/20, 12:11 PM
Whew! A story that starts off draggy, tedious and wandering and then, like a classic roller coaster climbing the first hill, suddenly picks ups speed and delivers a descriptive story worth of Papa. Bravo!
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/11/20, 11:34 AM
Or was Jason calling Matthew "Jessica" a momentary slip from his old life, while still adjusting to his new love life forever with Matthew. It would be interesting to see you continue this story to where they head back and Jason's former girlfriend Jessica is perplexed to see he has left her for Matthew.
10/11/20, 9:51 AM
Awesome story! Well thought through, I enjoyed the whole thing. Would read more chapters, should you feel inspired...
10/11/20, 9:36 AM
I think there's probably an interesting idea in here somewhere, but between all the spelling errors and formatting errors, I found this story almost impossible to read.
10/11/20, 9:27 AM
This story is trying to pack in a lot of different ideas and a lot of world-building. At the beginning, it has so much exposition, it felt a little tedious, but I was glad I stuck with it, because I enjoyed a lot of the bonkers sexual action that came next (even the bestiality scenes).
10/11/20, 8:35 AM
Awesome story. Love the idea of a hot stud like Tim with a tight pussy!
Sexcrab
10/11/20, 8:28 AM
A must-in, delicious story! Classic and hot. And although it doesn't seem like an obligation (the story seems to be a oneshot for me), the three characters had different personalities and very well written. Keep writing!
10/11/20, 6:29 AM
i really loved this chapter. can't wait for more.
Anonymous
10/11/20, 6:17 AM
Hot, although if he has mystical all purpose nanites, why cant he use them on his legs?..
10/11/20, 4:48 AM
I enjoyed this one a lot--you can't go wrong with that classic "one guy gets taken over, then recruits his friends" structure.