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Sexcrab
10/11/20, 8:28 AM
A must-in, delicious story! Classic and hot. And although it doesn't seem like an obligation (the story seems to be a oneshot for me), the three characters had different personalities and very well written. Keep writing!
10/11/20, 6:29 AM
i really loved this chapter. can't wait for more.
Anonymous
10/11/20, 6:17 AM
Hot, although if he has mystical all purpose nanites, why cant he use them on his legs?..
10/11/20, 4:48 AM
I enjoyed this one a lot--you can't go wrong with that classic "one guy gets taken over, then recruits his friends" structure.
10/11/20, 3:56 AM
Good story premise, although I thought it jumped a little too quickly from Day 7 (where the narrator is uncomfortable with nudity) to Day 13 (where the narrator is always naked and openly jerking off in front of his roommate). I also didn't really like the shift to a second narrator at the end; I think the story works much better when the master is a shadowy presence worshipped by Jonah and Russell, and I had no interest learning about his motivations.
10/11/20, 3:53 AM
I'm really excited to read this when it continues!
10/11/20, 2:53 AM
What happened to those men and Flip's dad is horrible. I'm glad Mattie found them, and that they're able to help them. Honestly, if it were me, I'd be terrified. I wouldn't begin to know how to help. This book is progressing nicely, and everyone seems to be growing into fine sky guard. Aaron may want to change these big guys into children like he did with Chuck and the coach, cause it might be what's best for them. I'm not too sure, but it did help the others before them. I'm also happy to see Mattie becoming himself again. I have high hopes for him and whatever he has to do with Tobias.
10/11/20, 1:58 AM
Loved it! Hope it continues.
10/11/20, 1:40 AM
So nice
10/11/20, 1:30 AM
incredible story! would love to hear more from you.