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giveintothemusk
10/10/20, 9:46 PM
Excellent story!
Anonymous
10/10/20, 9:39 PM
wonderful
10/10/20, 9:33 PM
Glad to hear that you're going to keep writing the story; tell your husband I appreciate his help getting back to writing. I'll look forward to the poll and look forward to help getting the familiars a bit more scene time.
giveintothemusk
10/10/20, 9:17 PM
πŸ₯°PitsπŸ₯°
10/10/20, 9:13 PM
Thanks @anon - I've been growing my hair out for almost a year, and it turns out that one of the intrusive thoughts you get is to just grab the trimmer and buzz it all off. But it looks too good to do that, so I gotta do it in stories instead ;)
10/10/20, 9:11 PM
Thanks @Maxisbored - I doubt I'll re-visit this universe, and if I do it'll be with a new young smartass who needs to know his place in the world. I'm think Kyle's probably pretty happy where he is.
Anonymous
10/10/20, 8:16 PM
@Thom - Yeah, I kind of flubbed the execution. It's always after it's too late when you realize how you could have made it better. I knew when I finished it something seemed a bit wrong with it but I couldn't figure it out. My original plan was to make it like a Twilight Zone episode, but the longer it went the less I really stuck to it. And with the deadline approaching, my focus on ending with the line "I like that idea," and just an overall feeling of being stuck, I couldn't really get my thoughts out right. But if I redid it, I'd probably separate each one into different little vignettes with different characters each affecting another person. So it starts in the office, goes to the gym, affects another character in the gym, who then goes and affects the security guard, then the security guard affects someone else, and then that someone else goes back to the office and sees the changes that were made by the original guy. And then it'd fit into the Pandemic theme a lot better too. But, oh well... @MonsterMash62 - Thanks!😁😁
blankbot
10/10/20, 7:30 PM
This is *very* hot--a bear with a bushy beard, tentacles, and mind control. Great combo!
Nutiper
10/10/20, 7:21 PM
Okay first off, not my usual kink but *damn* this was so hot & well-written that it turned me on anyway. And also β€” I just *love* the way this story keeps quietly de-stablizing what we think we know about what's going on. It is so well done. First that intro, where we start out thinking we're gonna read a story about a gay gym bro roommate who hasn't yet been affected by whatever is gonna happen... and then finding out, five paragraphs in, that *wait, something big has already happened, he used to be straight*. And meanwhile, we're still thinking that this is a COVID-19 story.... until we learn, very casually and one-third into the story, that actually a *very* different kind of pandemic is in play. I rate this five glowing dicks out of five. (Also five everything out of five.) *Nice.*
10/10/20, 7:05 PM
> Love it. Really enjoying these twists, @absman420 > Hahaha. Just getting started! Believe me when I say, everything you thought you knew...