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10/10/20, 11:56 PM
Great story! Really enjoyed the progressive changes to their minds as the quarantine persisted. Some issues with typos at times, but overall very good!
10/10/20, 10:00 PM
Very hot! Can't wait to see what he's going to do with Frank and any others. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. The handicapped angle introduces a fresh take on the need for slaves.
NZDom
10/10/20, 9:59 PM
looking forward to seeing more! love how the beast is unaware of the changes happening to him. He just takes things as a natural part of him
giveintothemusk
10/10/20, 9:46 PM
Excellent story!
Anonymous
10/10/20, 9:39 PM
wonderful
10/10/20, 9:33 PM
Glad to hear that you're going to keep writing the story; tell your husband I appreciate his help getting back to writing. I'll look forward to the poll and look forward to help getting the familiars a bit more scene time.
giveintothemusk
10/10/20, 9:17 PM
🥰Pits🥰
10/10/20, 9:13 PM
Thanks @anon - I've been growing my hair out for almost a year, and it turns out that one of the intrusive thoughts you get is to just grab the trimmer and buzz it all off. But it looks too good to do that, so I gotta do it in stories instead ;)
10/10/20, 9:11 PM
Thanks @Maxisbored - I doubt I'll re-visit this universe, and if I do it'll be with a new young smartass who needs to know his place in the world. I'm think Kyle's probably pretty happy where he is.
Anonymous
10/10/20, 8:16 PM
@Thom - Yeah, I kind of flubbed the execution. It's always after it's too late when you realize how you could have made it better. I knew when I finished it something seemed a bit wrong with it but I couldn't figure it out. My original plan was to make it like a Twilight Zone episode, but the longer it went the less I really stuck to it. And with the deadline approaching, my focus on ending with the line "I like that idea," and just an overall feeling of being stuck, I couldn't really get my thoughts out right. But if I redid it, I'd probably separate each one into different little vignettes with different characters each affecting another person. So it starts in the office, goes to the gym, affects another character in the gym, who then goes and affects the security guard, then the security guard affects someone else, and then that someone else goes back to the office and sees the changes that were made by the original guy. And then it'd fit into the Pandemic theme a lot better too. But, oh well... @MonsterMash62 - Thanks!😁😁