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blankbot
10/10/20, 7:30 PM
This is *very* hot--a bear with a bushy beard, tentacles, and mind control. Great combo!
Nutiper
10/10/20, 7:21 PM
Okay first off, not my usual kink but *damn* this was so hot & well-written that it turned me on anyway. And also — I just *love* the way this story keeps quietly de-stablizing what we think we know about what's going on. It is so well done. First that intro, where we start out thinking we're gonna read a story about a gay gym bro roommate who hasn't yet been affected by whatever is gonna happen... and then finding out, five paragraphs in, that *wait, something big has already happened, he used to be straight*. And meanwhile, we're still thinking that this is a COVID-19 story.... until we learn, very casually and one-third into the story, that actually a *very* different kind of pandemic is in play. I rate this five glowing dicks out of five. (Also five everything out of five.) *Nice.*
10/10/20, 7:05 PM
> Love it. Really enjoying these twists, @absman420 > Hahaha. Just getting started! Believe me when I say, everything you thought you knew...
10/10/20, 6:45 PM
Now that Ashton knows about Thomas' techniques and the basics of how to run an induction... what's to stop him from looking up how to hypnotize sleeping people? He only has to do what Thomas SAYS, and so long as Thomas doesn't specifically forbid him from using his phone, (which he can't, Ashton is taking pictures for a bunch of SUPER SLEEZY dudes on the internet) he can look up whatever he needs to while Thomas is sleeping. Hypnoguy12 and New Guy in Town are right, Ashton is the key to Thomas' undoing, because he left him so aware, and able to dive orders just a little. That sandwich? that SHOULD have been a warning sign to Thomas, and Charlie's warnings SHOULD have been taken seriously. But Thomas' foible as you have already presented it is simply: arrogance. He thinks he's too good to fall prey, and we need to use Ashton to prove him wrong. I agree that another chapter or two of adding to Thomas' stable while Ashton plots and plans and is SUPER FUCKING CAREFUL because he knows this is his only shot, before setting Thomas on a dream trance where he unintentionally frees Ashton would create an epic showdown.
Anonymous
10/10/20, 6:17 PM
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mustobey
10/10/20, 4:39 PM
Did not see this twist coming. Love it. Really enjoying these twists, @absman420. Thank you.
10/10/20, 4:21 PM
Wow this story was amazing! Great work.
10/10/20, 4:02 PM
I like this, excited for the next chapter.
10/10/20, 3:27 PM
honestly this is one of my favorite stories on here. I come back regularly to just reread it. mainly because the intelligence drain aspects are just awesome. could there ever be a follow up where our former nerd Kyle gets some of his brains back only for them to be sucked away again leaving him dumber than what he was previously?
Anonymous
10/10/20, 3:05 PM
excellent