Recent Comments

10/10/20, 12:58 PM
I really like the fact that Alex is a sub despite being the one with the mind control power, and is hot. Generally, the sub, even dominant, isn't as pretty as the top.
10/10/20, 10:38 AM
>Again, please don’t give up on this story just yet. > Oh, that was me blowing off some steam. I'm all good now. (My husband said, "Writing again? You always quit and come back -- every time, every writing project. What a diva!") > ...but more interested in seeing what happens to Rugby Boy, the Deputy, and Devin. (Personally, I’m more into the slaves and the modifications they undergo moreso than the hosts) > One of my cycling buddies is a big fan of the Deputy and I've been saying for weeks now, "Trust me -- I've got a plan! I've had a plan for the Deputy since the very beginning! You'll love where he ends up!" This was one of those events I've waited 15 years to write! I'm going to make a longer post in the POLL: Discussion thread on the Forum about the role of "Familiars" in this story -- I'll be talking about these characters a little more thoroughly. Please join in there!
10/10/20, 9:57 AM
Compelled to do what he wanted to do anyway? And with an enhanced body? More of this please!
10/10/20, 9:23 AM
interesting premise. nicely written. always thrilled for chapter 2. cant wait to see how this plays out
10/10/20, 9:01 AM
brilliant writing all.around! I will be coming back to this, again and again!
10/10/20, 8:58 AM
nice! another big sub small sub! cant wait for the 2md chapter!
Anonymous
10/10/20, 8:51 AM
excellent work
Anonymous
10/10/20, 8:51 AM
excellent work
10/10/20, 8:45 AM
oh,to have powers like these would be a dream. I guess senior agent will be next?
10/10/20, 7:22 AM
So hot until the love twist, it derailed for me after that. The unaware transformation was really hot, the dad plot thread left me hanging though.