Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/10/20, 3:05 PM
excellent
10/10/20, 2:55 PM
interesting... i want to see where it goes.. what other uses he'll have for Franks muscles!
10/10/20, 2:39 PM
Very nice!
Thom
10/10/20, 2:31 PM
I really want to like this story, but I mostly just did not understand what was going on. The parts that I understood were hot, though
EntrancedGay92
10/10/20, 2:24 PM
This was a wonderful story! The ending was a refreshing change from the same old "evil, horny, tist takes over the world" troupe that is starting to get overdone. I agree with another comment, though, that Peter and Andy's romance came a bit too fast. But it is not easy to write these types of scenes, in my experience, so I understand why it seems that way. The public service plot is great, mass hypnosis is my favorite and it was fun to have a radio involved this time instead of the televison. I would have liked to see some action between Peter and his dad, the scene where he catches him jerking off was hot. Overall well done!
10/10/20, 12:58 PM
I really like the fact that Alex is a sub despite being the one with the mind control power, and is hot. Generally, the sub, even dominant, isn't as pretty as the top.
10/10/20, 12:58 PM
I really like the fact that Alex is a sub despite being the one with the mind control power, and is hot. Generally, the sub, even dominant, isn't as pretty as the top.
10/10/20, 10:38 AM
>Again, please don’t give up on this story just yet. > Oh, that was me blowing off some steam. I'm all good now. (My husband said, "Writing again? You always quit and come back -- every time, every writing project. What a diva!") > ...but more interested in seeing what happens to Rugby Boy, the Deputy, and Devin. (Personally, I’m more into the slaves and the modifications they undergo moreso than the hosts) > One of my cycling buddies is a big fan of the Deputy and I've been saying for weeks now, "Trust me -- I've got a plan! I've had a plan for the Deputy since the very beginning! You'll love where he ends up!" This was one of those events I've waited 15 years to write! I'm going to make a longer post in the POLL: Discussion thread on the Forum about the role of "Familiars" in this story -- I'll be talking about these characters a little more thoroughly. Please join in there!
10/10/20, 9:57 AM
Compelled to do what he wanted to do anyway? And with an enhanced body? More of this please!
10/10/20, 9:23 AM
interesting premise. nicely written. always thrilled for chapter 2. cant wait to see how this plays out