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10/10/20, 5:13 AM
Cupid, these last few chapters have been your best yet! Honestly, every time one of the crews rescues and heals a slave I expect the slave character to be the same as the last, yet every time each boy feels different. If you really want to read between the line, I guess that just further proves that these slaves were never slaves to begin with and that even through all that programing they're still fighting to be free again. It breaks my heart to see what Mattie's been through, but I'm glad he's safe and healing now. Chris seems like a happy surprise, and honestly seems like he really needs Niko. I hope Toby finds out he's an angel soon and Carlos discovers what's really going on with his DNA. This crew honestly seems like the most loving family so far and it really warms my heart. I can't wait to read the next chapter as usual, keep up the good work!
10/10/20, 3:03 AM
And this is the reason we need you to keep this story going. Another amazing chapter of the story. I know I said I'm a fan the army guys, but this section made me a fan of the slaves. Rugby Boy and the Deputy are definitely my type of guys and definitely liked seeing the bond they have with the Sheriff and Snake. I really hope Devin gets to a similar position with the Army guys. I'm still looking forward to see what happens to them, but more interested in seeing what happens to Rugby Boy, the Deputy, and Devin. (Personally, I'm more into the slaves and the modifications they undergo moreso than the hosts; I do enjoy the flowering scenes where the host spread their seed and the flowers grow, but I enjoy the slaves so much more.) I enjoyed that Willis got a plant for all his trouble; he may not understand it now but he will once the pollen begins to do it works. Again, please don't give up on this story just yet. I truly enjoy the journey you're taking me on as a reader and it really would be sad if it were to go away.
10/10/20, 12:48 AM
im from small town ohio and left as soon as I could. great story, I like a happy ending.
10/9/20, 11:51 PM
>I am in Alpha heaven. > i knew you would dig that scene. > ...that Rugby Boy would be the recipient of the god seed. > I have plans for Rugby Boy... (ominous music)
10/9/20, 11:13 PM
Put me on my knees and get a cock or two in my face. I am in Alpha heaven. I thought, or was it hope, that Rugby Boy would be the recipient of the god seed.
10/9/20, 10:53 PM
Thank you everyone for your kind words! I'm glad you liked the story and I hope to have more soon! @Chrisco - so far the villain remains the winner... I'm always about the villains winning in the end ;) It's always way more fun.
10/9/20, 9:45 PM
This story was such a wonderful slow burn, and I loved the way it ramped up so consistently. I love me a demon corruption story, but there was also something so human and relatable about Valentine wanting to enjoy creature comforts since he'd been summoned. I especially loved the tiny whimsical moments like when a cartoon devil appeared on TV while Valentine was watching. I also loved the idea that Eli and Jake were being transformed. The ending feels juuust a little unresolved/quick, but I could easily imagine what would happen beyond this. The sexy scenes were also astoundingly hot and so well-written.
10/9/20, 9:11 PM
Its a very well done and interesting story. I love the set up and the design. I also like how Peter kind of knew something was going on but that he didn't mind them since he was already gay and they were hot for him. I do think the ending was a bit rushed, though probably as you wanted to fit it in the competition, so I don't like blame you or anything. I did really like the happy ending, I just wished there was a bit more of him going "look, my mind is my own and such but I love what you did and so lets date" rather than him being as obedient as everyone else. (Basically the moment he stopped calling him by his first name and called him instead Doctor was like I need to I was like nooooooo! Anyway, good story, sexy premise. Love the fact that the doctor took over his homophobic town. Its too bad he only had sex with the dudes his own age and not like the older sexy men too. Like Peter's dad, who totally needs to bend over, spread his leg, and get filled by cock. hehe
Anonymous
10/9/20, 8:59 PM
So happy you're revisiting these characters, thanks!
10/9/20, 8:25 PM
loved it!