Recent Comments

10/10/20, 4:02 PM
I like this, excited for the next chapter.
10/10/20, 3:27 PM
honestly this is one of my favorite stories on here. I come back regularly to just reread it. mainly because the intelligence drain aspects are just awesome. could there ever be a follow up where our former nerd Kyle gets some of his brains back only for them to be sucked away again leaving him dumber than what he was previously?
Anonymous
10/10/20, 3:05 PM
excellent
10/10/20, 2:55 PM
interesting... i want to see where it goes.. what other uses he'll have for Franks muscles!
10/10/20, 2:39 PM
Very nice!
Thom
10/10/20, 2:31 PM
I really want to like this story, but I mostly just did not understand what was going on. The parts that I understood were hot, though
EntrancedGay92
10/10/20, 2:24 PM
This was a wonderful story! The ending was a refreshing change from the same old "evil, horny, tist takes over the world" troupe that is starting to get overdone. I agree with another comment, though, that Peter and Andy's romance came a bit too fast. But it is not easy to write these types of scenes, in my experience, so I understand why it seems that way. The public service plot is great, mass hypnosis is my favorite and it was fun to have a radio involved this time instead of the televison. I would have liked to see some action between Peter and his dad, the scene where he catches him jerking off was hot. Overall well done!
10/10/20, 12:58 PM
I really like the fact that Alex is a sub despite being the one with the mind control power, and is hot. Generally, the sub, even dominant, isn't as pretty as the top.
10/10/20, 12:58 PM
I really like the fact that Alex is a sub despite being the one with the mind control power, and is hot. Generally, the sub, even dominant, isn't as pretty as the top.
10/10/20, 10:38 AM
>Again, please don’t give up on this story just yet. > Oh, that was me blowing off some steam. I'm all good now. (My husband said, "Writing again? You always quit and come back -- every time, every writing project. What a diva!") > ...but more interested in seeing what happens to Rugby Boy, the Deputy, and Devin. (Personally, I’m more into the slaves and the modifications they undergo moreso than the hosts) > One of my cycling buddies is a big fan of the Deputy and I've been saying for weeks now, "Trust me -- I've got a plan! I've had a plan for the Deputy since the very beginning! You'll love where he ends up!" This was one of those events I've waited 15 years to write! I'm going to make a longer post in the POLL: Discussion thread on the Forum about the role of "Familiars" in this story -- I'll be talking about these characters a little more thoroughly. Please join in there!