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10/9/20, 9:45 PM
This story was such a wonderful slow burn, and I loved the way it ramped up so consistently. I love me a demon corruption story, but there was also something so human and relatable about Valentine wanting to enjoy creature comforts since he'd been summoned. I especially loved the tiny whimsical moments like when a cartoon devil appeared on TV while Valentine was watching. I also loved the idea that Eli and Jake were being transformed. The ending feels juuust a little unresolved/quick, but I could easily imagine what would happen beyond this. The sexy scenes were also astoundingly hot and so well-written.
10/9/20, 9:11 PM
Its a very well done and interesting story. I love the set up and the design. I also like how Peter kind of knew something was going on but that he didn't mind them since he was already gay and they were hot for him. I do think the ending was a bit rushed, though probably as you wanted to fit it in the competition, so I don't like blame you or anything. I did really like the happy ending, I just wished there was a bit more of him going "look, my mind is my own and such but I love what you did and so lets date" rather than him being as obedient as everyone else. (Basically the moment he stopped calling him by his first name and called him instead Doctor was like I need to I was like nooooooo! Anyway, good story, sexy premise. Love the fact that the doctor took over his homophobic town. Its too bad he only had sex with the dudes his own age and not like the older sexy men too. Like Peter's dad, who totally needs to bend over, spread his leg, and get filled by cock. hehe
Anonymous
10/9/20, 8:59 PM
So happy you're revisiting these characters, thanks!
10/9/20, 8:25 PM
loved it!
10/9/20, 6:32 PM
Aw... happy ending mind-control story. That's nice.
Elm
10/9/20, 6:17 PM
This is the best one yet (in the contest). I would love to see more of the town (and the dad)!
Elm
10/9/20, 4:52 PM
This is a good one! hope we get to see more from you :)
10/9/20, 4:27 PM
Please tell me this isn't the end!! I absolutely love this story, the concept and execution are amazing. If it is the end, I am sad that we don't get more about Julien being affected by the Glass Half Full commands and maybe some hot stuff between Gil and Julien (or even all three...)
10/9/20, 4:17 PM
Man, this is a great story! I really hope there will be more to come. You did that unaware part really well. I want to see more of the entire mindfucked town. Like Peter's dad,for example. I hope you can get back to him. I'm happy Andy got what he wanted in the end. The guy he likes and a whole city of men waiting to serve him. I just think it could be more fleshed out if it were longer. It all happened quite fast
Anonymous
10/9/20, 4:03 PM
Incredible series! Is there there going to be more?