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10/10/20, 9:57 AM
Compelled to do what he wanted to do anyway? And with an enhanced body? More of this please!
10/10/20, 9:23 AM
interesting premise. nicely written. always thrilled for chapter 2. cant wait to see how this plays out
10/10/20, 9:01 AM
brilliant writing all.around! I will be coming back to this, again and again!
10/10/20, 8:58 AM
nice! another big sub small sub! cant wait for the 2md chapter!
Anonymous
10/10/20, 8:51 AM
excellent work
Anonymous
10/10/20, 8:51 AM
excellent work
10/10/20, 8:45 AM
oh,to have powers like these would be a dream. I guess senior agent will be next?
10/10/20, 7:22 AM
So hot until the love twist, it derailed for me after that. The unaware transformation was really hot, the dad plot thread left me hanging though.
Robert
10/10/20, 6:10 AM
Excellently written. Such a turn on for me. I wish for more stories like this.
10/10/20, 5:13 AM
Cupid, these last few chapters have been your best yet! Honestly, every time one of the crews rescues and heals a slave I expect the slave character to be the same as the last, yet every time each boy feels different. If you really want to read between the line, I guess that just further proves that these slaves were never slaves to begin with and that even through all that programing they're still fighting to be free again. It breaks my heart to see what Mattie's been through, but I'm glad he's safe and healing now. Chris seems like a happy surprise, and honestly seems like he really needs Niko. I hope Toby finds out he's an angel soon and Carlos discovers what's really going on with his DNA. This crew honestly seems like the most loving family so far and it really warms my heart. I can't wait to read the next chapter as usual, keep up the good work!