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10/9/20, 3:25 PM
awwwww,those two are sweet. can't wait for Nate to become a bit for confident in himself so that more sexy times might follow
Nutiper
10/9/20, 2:48 PM
This was so cute! If it wasn't for the length restriction of the theme-challenge, I could even see this as a much longer piece, too — like, spending even more time with Peter and the town around him as both slowly change in oblivious ways before reaching that ending. (Pretty much, it was a fun setting and concept to read! So I'd have been happy to be reading even more of it, ha.) Also, phew, Peter waking up to realize his jockstrap had completely fallen apart from his massive (oblivious) growth was *hot*. Plus that blowjob compulsion.... Mmm.... I *like* this approach to pandemic treatment!
10/9/20, 2:36 PM
This was delightful! Loved the mystery aspect, the humor, and even the famous Sympathy for the Devil. ;) Plus guys slowly transforming into non-humans is a secret weakness of mine, so the ending reveal that both Eli and Jake are not just getting buffer, but also more demonic, was a fantastic twist. And finally, I have to ask: were the names deliberate? Eli and Jacob, both Biblical figures, and would-be savior Gloria as "Gloria Hosanna." So clever!
10/9/20, 2:09 PM
hot!
10/9/20, 1:55 PM
Would have preferred to see Andy get a taste of his own medicine at the end; I felt like the story was a little too insistent that Andy had done nothing wrong, and that rubbed me the wrong way. But up until that ending section, this story was extremely hot, and I loved watching Peter's gradual transformation and rationalizations.
10/9/20, 1:54 PM
it was great.thank you
10/9/20, 1:50 PM
Very hot and sexy story!
10/9/20, 1:24 PM
Love this turn of events! Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/9/20, 1:07 PM
hi, i had a great time reading your story once again. I had already enjoyed reading The Collector, which to me is one of the best series about superheroes. Your work is fantastic and I was wondering when there would be a sequel. but being able to read the prequel is great. And to be honest, I would dream of a series where it would end really badly for the superheroes and where the supervillain would be the big and final winner.
10/9/20, 12:59 PM
when an update?