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Elm
10/9/20, 6:17 PM
This is the best one yet (in the contest). I would love to see more of the town (and the dad)!
Elm
10/9/20, 4:52 PM
This is a good one! hope we get to see more from you :)
10/9/20, 4:27 PM
Please tell me this isn't the end!! I absolutely love this story, the concept and execution are amazing. If it is the end, I am sad that we don't get more about Julien being affected by the Glass Half Full commands and maybe some hot stuff between Gil and Julien (or even all three...)
10/9/20, 4:17 PM
Man, this is a great story! I really hope there will be more to come. You did that unaware part really well. I want to see more of the entire mindfucked town. Like Peter's dad,for example. I hope you can get back to him. I'm happy Andy got what he wanted in the end. The guy he likes and a whole city of men waiting to serve him. I just think it could be more fleshed out if it were longer. It all happened quite fast
Anonymous
10/9/20, 4:03 PM
Incredible series! Is there there going to be more?
10/9/20, 3:25 PM
awwwww,those two are sweet. can't wait for Nate to become a bit for confident in himself so that more sexy times might follow
Nutiper
10/9/20, 2:48 PM
This was so cute! If it wasn't for the length restriction of the theme-challenge, I could even see this as a much longer piece, too — like, spending even more time with Peter and the town around him as both slowly change in oblivious ways before reaching that ending. (Pretty much, it was a fun setting and concept to read! So I'd have been happy to be reading even more of it, ha.) Also, phew, Peter waking up to realize his jockstrap had completely fallen apart from his massive (oblivious) growth was *hot*. Plus that blowjob compulsion.... Mmm.... I *like* this approach to pandemic treatment!
10/9/20, 2:36 PM
This was delightful! Loved the mystery aspect, the humor, and even the famous Sympathy for the Devil. ;) Plus guys slowly transforming into non-humans is a secret weakness of mine, so the ending reveal that both Eli and Jake are not just getting buffer, but also more demonic, was a fantastic twist. And finally, I have to ask: were the names deliberate? Eli and Jacob, both Biblical figures, and would-be savior Gloria as "Gloria Hosanna." So clever!
10/9/20, 2:09 PM
hot!
10/9/20, 1:55 PM
Would have preferred to see Andy get a taste of his own medicine at the end; I felt like the story was a little too insistent that Andy had done nothing wrong, and that rubbed me the wrong way. But up until that ending section, this story was extremely hot, and I loved watching Peter's gradual transformation and rationalizations.