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Anonymous
10/9/20, 11:18 AM
That twist was amazing!
10/9/20, 10:15 AM
I absolutely loved this story--so funny and yet sexy at the same time! And I appreciated how the reader didn't already need to know a lot of incubus mythology to understand what was going on.
Hypno_Master
10/9/20, 9:58 AM
I am really enjoying the story. I especially like the way that you're mixing the emotional stuff and the control stuff in a perfect balance. If I could make One suggestion/request, I would like to see a chapter or two with a little more of the mind control. Perhaps Nate could use that "zone out" command to take Dave into deep hypnosis and then make changes to Dave without Dave knowing it. Obviously Dave would agree to whatever changes need made without the hypnosis, but it would be hot if Dave were commanded to grow a beard/mustache, or get off on spanking himself in front of Nate, just little changes that Dave is unaware he's being made to make. I wouldn't want that to become the sole focus of the story, but a couple of chapters of Nate playing with Dave's mind without Dave being aware of it could be a hot addition In any case thank you for taking the time to write this
10/9/20, 8:56 AM
I love the story, so far. But interestingly for a GSS story, I almost wish the mind control element had been downplayed or even omitted. The thought of someone being controlled in this manner solely through blackmail and control of one's dick is, IMO, hotter than the thought of the victim also being brainwashed into becoming the usual mind-controlled slut. I'm still enjoying it so far, though.
boi98229
10/9/20, 6:16 AM
Wow! i have read some *really good* stories on this site, but i think this was the best, not only among the 'pandemic' stories, but including all the stories i've read here. The scene in the dungeon of the sex club was so reminiscent of my own visit to the Power Exchange in San Francisco, where my host member was a regular volunteer almost every Friday on the flogging bench in a impact play session designed to entertain and excite the crowd. Since then, i had my own first impact play session closer to home in which i was bound and flogged. During the session the Top would occasionally check in with me to make sure the session was proceeding well. Given these two real live experiences in particular, the Dungeon scene in this story became a living experience for me, and helped to bring the whole story to vivid life. i think the whole idea of an evolving symbiotic relationship between a sentient nanobot population and a human is brilliant! The whole plot progression was so realistically plausible as soon as you accepted the 'reality' of F9. It flowed perfectly. i am so hoping you plan to continue with this story after you win this pandemic story-writing contest!! Please! At the least, i need to know your username once the contest is over. i definitely plan to read all your stories as soon as i can! Thanks so much for your imagination, writing skills, and willingness to share them.
Anonymous
10/9/20, 6:07 AM
I'm telling you guys. he's a legend. Nutiper is one of the greats. I really.... really hope you continue writing, you make the hottest stories.
10/9/20, 6:03 AM
Great story but needs tattoos. The wonder of sudden recognition of having badass tattoos.
10/9/20, 4:44 AM
I need more!
10/9/20, 4:33 AM
Love this story! One of the greatest foot fetish stories I've read! Are body swap stories of any interest to you? A body swap story that involves feet and humiliation are hot as hell! Please think on it!
boi98229
10/9/20, 4:31 AM
Okay, you've absolutely sold me on the idea of ordering an Internet-connected chastity device. i had thought i would wait until i found a Master who may want me locked up in chastity. This chastity marketing ploy disguised as an erotic story is so smart! Now i am thinking i will lock myself up, get the chastity device registered to its web site, and have a powerful Master will come to me! i love this idea! So you would have made a sale, but you sadly didn't identify the brand of your chastity device or include a link to your online store. Even worse, you've forgotten to upload the rest of the story. i really need to read it, Sir. i need more information about this device and its phone app, including hot to purchase one. i am also really looking forward to listening to your phone videos, Sir. Please...