Recent Comments

10/9/20, 2:21 AM
I've loved this entire series, binged it all today. This chapter has been my favorite so far (though Ethan and Chuck's was a close second!) I especially love the direction Dave and Adam's relationship. They're gonna make great dads :D
10/9/20, 1:28 AM
ooh very hot
10/9/20, 12:22 AM
This really makes me wish I wasn't locked int stainless cock armor. As it is, I'm sittting here in my brand-new A-Stars Tech Lite 1 pc undersuit, and Fox Maverick boots wishing I could do more than just feel Sir's property twitch in its armor. The description of the bike, the description of the leathers, the gloves and the helmet all ring true and give enough to imagine the fit, look and feel. The wording of the ride reminds me of everytime I get out on my Daytona 675. I wish I had a helmet like the narrator's, only tune to bot or drone rather than pup me. Strangely enough, Sir's name is Joe....
10/9/20, 12:12 AM
Not my usual theme, but damn i may be a convert to Orc sex after reading this! So hot. Also it was touching in a spiritual and romantic way that i almost never look for in my smut, but actually i really enjoyed how you created that bond between the characters here. TBH im a little jealous of Dornath now
Alex Lat
10/8/20, 11:18 PM
its too much to ask this story be real ? love it , perfect
10/8/20, 9:31 PM
Great chapter! I was worried about Toby since the beginning, I'm glad they rescued him, and found Cruz's brother along the way. I like the part about Tempest, and his cryptic message. I'm honored that you put my name is as a character, he seems like a sweetie. If you're curious as to why I chose the name Tempest, it's because it's a reference to a great wolf spirit of storm (Do with that info what you will). In regards to your character, I don't have a clue as to who he's looking for or what "the arrival" is, but I hope you'll show us soon. As usual, I very much look forward to more chapters!
10/8/20, 8:31 PM
Absolutely great story. I love the concept and follow through, and my only issues are in grammar and word choice. Details are what make a world more real, so I appreciate the little family lore that explains the how and why behind the what. I would love to see a series of this, a family tree maybe?
10/8/20, 7:42 PM
Yay, nanites !! And the story is well written too. Thanks !
10/8/20, 7:04 PM
fantastically well written and so much fun to see his progression. nice work!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/8/20, 5:28 PM
This really gets me wanting to try chastity, longterm.