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Lakritz24
10/8/20, 1:35 AM
Loving You Too. I love him.
Kovu
10/8/20, 1:11 AM
Hot hot hot!! please write more like this story!
10/8/20, 1:00 AM
> “What the actual fuck!” were the first words out of his mouth. > “You’re in a bit of a mood.” > “How could you do that to him?” > “You heard him,” Thomas said. “If I let him go, he’d have taken you and blown the whistle on this whole thing.” > “Then make him forget and leave. Why did you have to do all that other stuff?” > “It may seem cruel, mostly because it is, but my method only works by fully breaking down the participant. If I didn’t ingrain that conditioning as deeply as I did, it’d have worn off in a matter of hours and we’d be right back here.” > “So you had to rob him off all of his knowledge?” Ashton asked. This is without a doubt, one of my favorite written exchanges that I have ever read. The verbal exchanges between these two are so great that it makes me want to keep reading. I love the dumbing down of the professor; would love to see more of that, but would also love to see Ashton break free and get revenge on Thomas maybe dumbing him down? Keep up the good work!
10/8/20, 12:42 AM
Glad to see you're continuing this as well. Looking forward to reading more!
10/7/20, 10:49 PM
Seems like the majority is hoping for the sons to become sex slaves as well but I'm not a fan of that. Sure they should be taken down a peg and hypnotized into submission, but then they can be used to generate income by various means (mainly Prostitution) leaving more room for Dan to use his Pet Daddy. Maybe make it so that they think they are unworthy of the Alpha's attention and make them into hopeless/depressed whores who are just eager to be useful in anyway. They know Dan has chosen their father to be his bitch and they can do nothing but accept that they are only kept around to make money, but they accept this because they want to be useful.
10/7/20, 9:54 PM
love it! and can't wait for more!!!
10/7/20, 9:18 PM
Great narrative style, love the concept! Got me thinking about all the F9 orgies those little buggers instigated! Very well done!
10/7/20, 9:00 PM
The way you got inside his head as he slowly succumbed to the manipulations, and gleefully gave up every bit of free will because he was just so turned on, was absolutely scorching. Outstanding.
10/7/20, 8:25 PM
Oh my GOD, this was PERFECT. I admit I have been checking the site a few times a day to wait for this chapter. And it did NOT disappoint! Everything about this was achingly hot--the transformation, the scene of Danny inspecting his new self, and ESPECIALLY the mental shift. There's a conversation in the forum right now about how to write a good "dumbing down" story; this is a perfect example. Seeing Danny go from a dedicated investigator to a hedonistic himbo who doesn't care about anything but sex and serving a master...daaaaamn. Well done! :)