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10/7/20, 6:50 PM
I should have realized that he was going to loose. Its kind of sad though. I wish he wouldn't have come out this way. But oh well, at least the first story had him being dominant and such. That said the general idea of this is pretty hot. Especially how he is turning the community into subby needy bottom boys.
10/7/20, 6:47 PM
This was incredibly hot. The idea that the brother had been hypnotized before and subconsciously likes it was brilliant. I very much like our our hypnotist brother is keeping in charge, staying on top. I hope that remains. I would like to suggest some rimming, that is, of our main brother rimming that of his subby brothers. As an aside I can imagine that the one teammate wasn't the only one hypnoed by the coach. I bet his fellow players were put under too. That could be an interesting dynamic. Though if our guy wants to keep it in the family then him keeping it so him and his brothers have some good time at home would be great. I could also see the father being hypnoed into submission and bottoming as well.
10/7/20, 6:43 PM
Honestly, I want t would like to see Edward put Coach Trent, and subsequently the rest of Luke's team under his control.
10/7/20, 6:39 PM
I've been looking forward to Part 2 since you mentioned you would be posting it. I really appreciate Danny's interiority and the time you spend building up to just how eager and horny Danny is to be transformed until he just begs for it. Very nice, very fucking hot.
10/7/20, 6:28 PM
A great start!
10/7/20, 6:27 PM
A really hot story, I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
10/7/20, 4:20 PM
Firstly, thanks for your suggestions and comments to my story. Secondly, this whole series really took erotica to the next level. The amount of grace you took in discussing people's lives before and after transformation. 👌