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10/5/20, 9:33 AM
I live to serve the virus
Anonymous
10/5/20, 6:51 AM
This chapter is pretty promising. I can't wait to see their progression, well, degradation even further!
Evan
10/5/20, 6:33 AM
This was a well-written piece. It is confusing and has interesting pacing. I can't help but feel that the ending is disappointing to the reader as the two major points that were built for the entire story are not actually answered for the reader. The protagonist's journey is, and that is an ending of its own, and quite sweet that he gets to reconnect with his old friend and overcome his prejudices, though only by becoming what he avoided before, whatever that may be. Was this just about self-acceptance? It feels very metaphorical. I guess the reader can take away what they want but it felt like it was missing a satisfying conclusion and fulfillment of a promise. Still, very well done.
MakeMeAPigToo
10/5/20, 5:55 AM
I love this!! Would enjoy more chapters!!
10/5/20, 5:47 AM
is this story ever gonna get done?
10/5/20, 5:35 AM
Great story right to the end! Very hot and very fun!
10/5/20, 5:29 AM
upupupu whats this? a danganronpa story
10/5/20, 5:18 AM
Please tell me this story takes place on the inland. The idea is interesting. I hope theres more to this story, because right now I'm intrigued.
Thom
10/5/20, 5:11 AM
As someone who loves Danganronpa V3 (the reference Hypnothrill mentioned), it's nice to see something related to that game on here. But, like Hypnothrill said, people who don't know that game could be very confused reading this
10/5/20, 4:46 AM
I liked the second half of this story, where Kaito is getting controlled by hypnotic spirals. But the first half was full of references that made no sense at all to me. I'm guessing this is fan fiction, but it would be nice if that was mentioned somewhere in the story description or tags.