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boi98229
10/5/20, 3:30 AM
OMG, this story is so *hot!* On my blog site another member used the tag "sensual dominance". This story epitomizes that in such a powerful way! I am going to re-read this chapter until the next one comes out -- soon i hope! i noticed in your comments at the top of the chapter that English is not your native language. i am not a professional copy-editor by any means, but i am willing to review your copy prior to your posting it, if you like.
10/5/20, 2:21 AM
It felt like Alfred Hitchcock or Twilight Zone, full of suspence. If it had been too much longer, I might have gone insane from the anticipation
Nutiper
10/5/20, 1:59 AM
@Rock Creek Werewolf: Thank you so much for offering!! I think I'm okay now... I was able to chat with @Dace, and he helped me walk through the details. I was able to edit the current section (and makes note for the next section) so that at least I'm not mangling basic geography. But I *very* much appreciate the offer — and I hope the next part of the story won't be jarring for those reasons!
10/5/20, 12:20 AM
loved every part of
Anonymous
10/4/20, 11:58 PM
yum. like the kinks. too.
EJG
10/4/20, 10:44 PM
What a damned shame this has come to an end. Hope the authors OK? Sure woulda liked a continuation.?
10/4/20, 10:22 PM
will you continue please?
Oct 3, 2020
roomservice
10/4/20, 10:21 PM
good story. Keep this going. Lot's more possibilities.
Anonymous
10/4/20, 10:16 PM
Damn, IDK if this one got overlooked for comments because it came out on NYE, but what a great two-parter. Love it.
roomservice
10/4/20, 9:11 PM
interesting new idea.. keep going with it. You're doing fine. Take your time.