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Anonymous
10/4/20, 3:35 PM
There's something missing in contemporary writing; imagination. Old movies and plays depended on the reader to fill in the gaps, imagine the weapon, the motive. I liked this story because it made me wonder what the condition was and why people feared it. I hope there's a second that takes us from a blurry close up to a wider, more detailed image but as a stand alone, I can write my own story in my mind and come up with my own scenario. I liked it****.
10/4/20, 3:17 PM
This is a fun setup, I like it. Although Its a bit short for my taste, definitely leaves me wanting more, I hope the following chapters are longer.
10/4/20, 2:52 PM
I hope to see the sequel soon
Anonymous
10/4/20, 1:54 PM
So, the thing about this site is that... You can't expect to have a guy turning gay play as an actual twist. We all know that's where it's going before we even click on it.
10/4/20, 1:30 PM
My favorite story so far.
10/4/20, 12:31 PM
great set up. can't wait for more.
10/4/20, 12:19 PM
I don't get it. I mean it's actually quite interesting as a writing prompt.. I would enjoy it as a reading from Reddit or something, and it left me wanting more. What's the disease? What is the process? What are the consequences? Why is it so fast? But ultimately, I don't see how it fits on this site.
10/4/20, 11:53 AM
I don't know if I'm missing something here or something, but I think it's a bit short. The setting has great potential if you ask me, but the story is so short that I find it hard to get into it. The condition isn't specified, nor is the process or the results of that process. That makes it not really the right story for me. But maybe I'm just missing something here and there are people laughing really hard about me missing the clue here ;)
10/4/20, 10:59 AM
Make this story a series please, because it's a very good
10/4/20, 9:25 AM
I really enjoyed this story! would read more chapters if you ever write them. Like a more twisted Umbrella Academy with special flavour. I'd also recommend engaging the proof readers to catch out the typos from your typing - it would make the reading smoother.