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Oct 3, 2020
roomservice
10/4/20, 10:21 PM
good story. Keep this going. Lot's more possibilities.
Anonymous
10/4/20, 10:16 PM
Damn, IDK if this one got overlooked for comments because it came out on NYE, but what a great two-parter. Love it.
roomservice
10/4/20, 9:11 PM
interesting new idea.. keep going with it. You're doing fine. Take your time.
Rock Creek Werewolf
10/4/20, 8:56 PM
@Nupiter - I'm at RkCreekWerewolf@gmail.com, if you still want to connect re: DC specifics.
10/4/20, 7:40 PM
I think I partly agree with that last comment... Jeez this story certainly got under my skin hahaha, don't think there are a lot of stories that keep me occupied this much :3
10/4/20, 6:27 PM
Thank y'all for your feedback! Sorry about how short it was, as I was pressed for time. I hope to write the next chapter very soon, which will be longer.
10/4/20, 5:05 PM
I really enjoyed this story!!
10/4/20, 4:31 PM
really nice job. I hope we'll get a second chapter,maybe. let's see how Robert and co. spice up their meetings even more
Anonymous
10/4/20, 3:35 PM
There's something missing in contemporary writing; imagination. Old movies and plays depended on the reader to fill in the gaps, imagine the weapon, the motive. I liked this story because it made me wonder what the condition was and why people feared it. I hope there's a second that takes us from a blurry close up to a wider, more detailed image but as a stand alone, I can write my own story in my mind and come up with my own scenario. I liked it****.
10/4/20, 3:17 PM
This is a fun setup, I like it. Although Its a bit short for my taste, definitely leaves me wanting more, I hope the following chapters are longer.