Recent Comments

10/4/20, 7:40 PM
I think I partly agree with that last comment... Jeez this story certainly got under my skin hahaha, don't think there are a lot of stories that keep me occupied this much :3
10/4/20, 6:27 PM
Thank y'all for your feedback! Sorry about how short it was, as I was pressed for time. I hope to write the next chapter very soon, which will be longer.
10/4/20, 5:05 PM
I really enjoyed this story!!
10/4/20, 4:31 PM
really nice job. I hope we'll get a second chapter,maybe. let's see how Robert and co. spice up their meetings even more
Anonymous
10/4/20, 3:35 PM
There's something missing in contemporary writing; imagination. Old movies and plays depended on the reader to fill in the gaps, imagine the weapon, the motive. I liked this story because it made me wonder what the condition was and why people feared it. I hope there's a second that takes us from a blurry close up to a wider, more detailed image but as a stand alone, I can write my own story in my mind and come up with my own scenario. I liked it****.
10/4/20, 3:17 PM
This is a fun setup, I like it. Although Its a bit short for my taste, definitely leaves me wanting more, I hope the following chapters are longer.
10/4/20, 2:52 PM
I hope to see the sequel soon
Anonymous
10/4/20, 1:54 PM
So, the thing about this site is that... You can't expect to have a guy turning gay play as an actual twist. We all know that's where it's going before we even click on it.
10/4/20, 1:30 PM
My favorite story so far.
10/4/20, 12:31 PM
great set up. can't wait for more.