Recent Comments

10/4/20, 12:19 PM
I don't get it. I mean it's actually quite interesting as a writing prompt.. I would enjoy it as a reading from Reddit or something, and it left me wanting more. What's the disease? What is the process? What are the consequences? Why is it so fast? But ultimately, I don't see how it fits on this site.
10/4/20, 11:53 AM
I don't know if I'm missing something here or something, but I think it's a bit short. The setting has great potential if you ask me, but the story is so short that I find it hard to get into it. The condition isn't specified, nor is the process or the results of that process. That makes it not really the right story for me. But maybe I'm just missing something here and there are people laughing really hard about me missing the clue here ;)
10/4/20, 10:59 AM
Make this story a series please, because it's a very good
10/4/20, 9:25 AM
I really enjoyed this story! would read more chapters if you ever write them. Like a more twisted Umbrella Academy with special flavour. I'd also recommend engaging the proof readers to catch out the typos from your typing - it would make the reading smoother.
10/4/20, 9:06 AM
Excellent beginning! Can't wait to read the rest!
Dec 24, 2014
10/4/20, 8:03 AM
well i hope theres an update too this :)
10/4/20, 7:58 AM
thank you for granting my request ulver91! I love you man! haha
10/4/20, 6:52 AM
Very good mix of character development, mind control and sexy times. Thank you for all the effort you put in. I really enjoyed seeing how they react and grow and hypno each other. The formatting is very clever too. Just a suggestion, but could you put in a list of characters somewhere? With the different user names and names going around, it sometimes takes me a minute to figure out who is who.
10/4/20, 5:30 AM
Really enjoyed this story! I look forward to the next chapter.
Oct 2, 2020
10/4/20, 5:16 AM
Such a hot and well-written story!