Recent Comments

10/4/20, 10:59 AM
Make this story a series please, because it's a very good
10/4/20, 9:25 AM
I really enjoyed this story! would read more chapters if you ever write them. Like a more twisted Umbrella Academy with special flavour. I'd also recommend engaging the proof readers to catch out the typos from your typing - it would make the reading smoother.
10/4/20, 9:06 AM
Excellent beginning! Can't wait to read the rest!
Dec 24, 2014
10/4/20, 8:03 AM
well i hope theres an update too this :)
10/4/20, 7:58 AM
thank you for granting my request ulver91! I love you man! haha
10/4/20, 6:52 AM
Very good mix of character development, mind control and sexy times. Thank you for all the effort you put in. I really enjoyed seeing how they react and grow and hypno each other. The formatting is very clever too. Just a suggestion, but could you put in a list of characters somewhere? With the different user names and names going around, it sometimes takes me a minute to figure out who is who.
10/4/20, 5:30 AM
Really enjoyed this story! I look forward to the next chapter.
Oct 2, 2020
10/4/20, 5:16 AM
Such a hot and well-written story!
Jake
10/4/20, 4:58 AM
I hope we get to hear more about the adventures of Barkley and his new family.
10/4/20, 4:57 AM
Every chapter leaves me wanting more. I would love to ask you to release more chapters per day, but i already know that even if you released the whole series in one day it wouldn't be enough. I really loved the prophesy about "the one" as well as Titus being Ogen. It seems like it's really building up and i cant wait to see what's next!