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10/3/20, 11:42 PM
Yes, I made this one shorter because it's actually half of a chapter that was getting too long.
10/3/20, 11:41 PM
okay. comments ahem. to be fair continuity is what you make of it but we don't know what happened to the initial wave of men Smitty and Mike and I think well it's the comic that has submitting deciding to leave the town not necessarily the original story so so it's entirely possible in addition to other meteors that there are rogue assets going around doing as they will. or not all pollination needs to be direct from host still still give something for our Scully to do somehow missing a ridiculously odd migration pattern all to one defunct farm overall overall this has been a solid experience
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10/3/20, 11:33 PM
I wish I could find a file to change me like that.
10/3/20, 11:19 PM
Well then, time to use Dell to get the coach! Or the team to get more dads into action? But thats for further development and if you want to. That being said... Since Bob is so into Dan's cock, how about making the sons into other kind of body parts? Like Michael into feet? Seems a good start if he is going to be on the bottom?
10/3/20, 11:11 PM
@Heru Kane. I get curious, why do you think that Bob couldn't be a realistic boyfriend figure? About all four having fun together, I agree. Incest is on of my favorite kinks and I want to get there! Sadly I think I put the pace on the story too slow, I'll try to fix that. ;) And lastly, maybe Michael isn't on a team anymore but Dell is :) @AnonReader. Thanks for your comment. Yes, this was more of a developtment chapter for Michael character and future interactions than a fun sexy super kinky one. I'll try to compensate that in the next chapters.
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10/3/20, 11:07 PM
I live to serve the virus
AnonReader
10/3/20, 11:03 PM
Although not much sex content, I appreciate this chapter as bridging development. I can only say I pretty much agree with Heru Kane's suggestions. If anything, I'm neutral on Bob as a "boyfriend" (he's so devoted already to Dan as his number one bitch). The suggestions for Dan (muscle slut, cum guzzler, obviously thinking he's just being a masc muscle bro in all of these activities) is very hot and Heru Kane put it in very eloquent/hot/suggestive words. Thank you for continuing the story.
10/3/20, 10:54 PM
Well, normally, in a story the act of making a guy a whore causes things to be unbelievable but I can totally see Michael providing the full special at the shop that is basically him sucking cock or getting fucked. Ooh, maybe make it so he doesn't consider it as him being a whore but rather some other masculine thing that could have the men who come by amused and such. But yeah, I think Michael going all sexy time online would be fine. I also agree with the one poster who is sad that he left the team, cause taking over a team is super hot. That said there is always the potential of taking over the jocks at the gym. hehe I still think having Bob be a boyfriend figure is not exactly a realistic thing. Maybe you could make the second son the boyfriend figure. I do think, like the one poster suggested, that it shouldn't be just Dan and Bob and Dan and Michael and Dan and the second son but all four having fun together, though in different ways. I think bringing forth more of Michael's jock and bro tendencies could be fun. He isn't super intelligent anyway so having him focus on gym work and online porn and then the special work at the shop would work well for him. He isn't gay, he is a bro, and its totally logical for bros to like the muscles of bros and also as a jock he needs all the protein he can get, and what better source then from cocks.
10/3/20, 10:46 PM
****Loved this story and hope it's only the first part of more!
10/3/20, 10:36 PM
@Erratic 101. Don't you worry, I want to explore more about Bob dynamics with his sons soon. I think you'll like it. @Musclerider. Thanks for your suggestions. TBH I don't know if I could fit those perfectly to the story, but I can guarantee that those muscle wouldn't be wasted. I think it's hot that Bob continues to be the domestic muscle slave (as Erratic101 said) so let's wait to see how Dan would put Michael to work. @Heru Kane. I agree with you, it wouldn't be fair make Bob the the lowest in the family, Michael has a lot of dues to pay. And what's wrong with being a whore in the physical?. I think that Michael's full special service at the workshop would be a great business! ;) Thanks for your comment, I always enjoy reading your input. @Vulcan. I agree. Why conform with only one if you can get three slaves? @BobbyBlobfish. I want to go by different routes with every member so I think that Bob falling in love with Dan would be fun, isn't it? About Michael, he needs therapy a lot! Maybe making him docile and obedient would help him with his anger. @NZDom. Thanks for your comment. I think it would be fun to rearrange the family. Dan would be a perfect stepdad for Michael and Dell, he surely would teach them some manners. Also what better than a muscle bear as his devoted trophy wife. @Udems. The whole family have some financial struggles, I think that money would be great! ;) Thanks for your reminder! I wanted to add the name of the stories as a recommendation but I totally forgot. (I hope that my short summaries make justice to the stories) The werewolf and the nerd its "Nate and Dave" by Nacho. The twink creating his perfect daddy it's "The Cuckoo's Call" by Lord and Master in London. And finally the straight man brainwashed by his roommate it's "Tailor-Made Twink" by Daisy I. B. de Melcker