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10/4/20, 4:10 AM
Amazing....... I love the series... Keep going please....
Anonymous
10/4/20, 3:57 AM
Writing takes time. Especially if you want to write erotica without it sounding like a 7th grader wrote it. Though i do also eagerly look forward to the next chapter. I've always fantasized about this with a few of my friends.
10/4/20, 3:16 AM
Great concluding chapter to this hot story! Thanks for the explanation of Travis's motivation and the connection between Travis and Andy.
10/4/20, 3:12 AM
Right, no need to rush things. Which is why I am saying hold back on the whole 'boyfriend' thing till all three men in the family have been showcased. Then Dan can go and pick and stuff. Making the men obedient and submissive and needy is all good and should be done but to say right now to Bob through the hypno video 'you love Dan and want to be his subby boyfriend' kind of cuts off potential plot points. :) Also, I too like DILFS. hehe
10/4/20, 3:11 AM
This is an INCREDIBLE story! I'm an ass man myself (that and pecs), so this is right up my alley. Amazing stuff and amazing descriptions! :)
Tf cum fun
10/4/20, 3:06 AM
I feel the same as the other commenter, fun concept done pretty well just needs to be paced out a little more. and yeah better elaborate on stuff like the transfer brain ball smarts I was also confused what was going on haha, like it dropping as his primitive urges continue? this concept reminds me of one of my favorite tg stories where guys get tf'd by cum, really goes heavy into the steamy tf descriptions and is a lot of messy fun(: might give you some inspiration if you decide to continue, had fun with it! http://www.fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=342412333894896261 I know this place is guy centric but I'd LOVE too see what happens if a female friend gets cum drenched, fellow tf into a guy or lesbian butch gooey tf, lots of fun options!!
10/4/20, 2:31 AM
@Udems. Same, DILFS are my thing, what can I do? I love to read everyone's personal opinions about what they want with the story because sometimes are great ideas that I could adapt. I don’t like to say on here what I would or wouldn’t add to the story because even some of the original ideas that I had weren’t used. So about feet, I can't say that it's 100% sure that it would be used on the story, but I can try ;) @Heru Kane. There's much I can do with Dell, but I think first I have to explore Michael. Let's be patient :) I avoid to be direct with future plots because I don't want to force myself to keep a path only because I said before that I would. But with the incest, I'm sure that the story will go there. And the last thing I can say it's that there is a reason for Michael to be the typical gym bro and Dell the classic football jock. It let me explore some fun situations.
10/4/20, 1:55 AM
I'm a DC resident, too. Send your reality-warper to Adams Morgan, because I'd love to see what he could do at Pitcher's and Duplex. Although I think it's already happened at the latter... :)
Anonymous
10/4/20, 1:45 AM
i love stories like these, when they are trapped in their own mind. great revenge story!
10/4/20, 1:10 AM
Well, to each their own, the feet its just an option lol But I do hope Dan gets Bob as the boyfriend, I also love dilfs over boys as victims :P If you want to keep it to the family, definitely an uncle or a grampa can be added <3