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1/13/25, 4:30 AM
O fuck!!! This is so hot
8/6/24, 10:02 AM
amazing end to a great series!

8/6/24, 11:08 AM
@[cigar_muscle](/user/show/17400) Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the feedback.

Anonymous
1/13/25, 4:07 AM
@[cigar_muscle](/user/show/17400)
Anonymous
12/4/23, 5:47 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter

12/5/23, 5:27 AM
@Anonymous You may be waiting for quite a while… finals week is here. Plus, I got in the mood for a certain type of TF so I started writing another story too 😳 I already have the basic ideas and story flow in my head. I think I can wrap everything in like a chapter or 2. Just need to find time to write them down

1/13/25, 3:33 AM
@[N🌙va](/user/show/917556) hope its still coming
Tex
1/13/25, 3:31 AM
The more I think of the second path, I’m not sure I care for it. The first five chapters were quite promising. The last two (2 path), for me, were disappointing.
1/13/25, 2:38 AM
this was great
1/13/25, 1:22 AM
This will definitely be fun. Frank is putty in Rick's hand. And that cage is going to help mold him ever more into being Rick's playing. Losing control and focus over his stick will help drive him to focus on what he needs more and more.
1/12/25, 11:50 PM
I hope he can adjust like the others did.
1/12/25, 11:29 PM
I hope this story continues
1/12/25, 11:04 PM
I don't recall Lucas being Cockney so why did Malvin end up with that accent. Just curious.
10/12/24, 11:46 PM
Sorry, something just triggered me. I have no idea what. The story is very well written and flows well. I know it's a fantasy but I can't help but feel sorry for Richard.

1/12/25, 3:56 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Don’t be sorry for being angry, it just shows that you’re a decent human being who has a soul, heck, I had to put the story down for a while because it’s so infuriating No offense to the author though

1/12/25, 10:20 PM
@[ShadowWalker](/user/show/10025715) In my mind Richard has his justice and Grandma won't like it. I imagine her turned into a true living statue. They'll say she died but she's sealed inside a bronze form that matches her body exactly. There is a full life support and nanohealth care built in. She will age very very slowly and see and sense everything while being unable to respond. It will be a couple hundred years before she dies of old age. The nanobots will compress her remains into ashes that fit in the niche just below her; where everyone was told her ashes were put. Only Richard and possibly Jason and his brother would know the truth.