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Anonymous
10/3/20, 11:07 PM
I live to serve the virus
AnonReader
10/3/20, 11:03 PM
Although not much sex content, I appreciate this chapter as bridging development. I can only say I pretty much agree with Heru Kane's suggestions. If anything, I'm neutral on Bob as a "boyfriend" (he's so devoted already to Dan as his number one bitch). The suggestions for Dan (muscle slut, cum guzzler, obviously thinking he's just being a masc muscle bro in all of these activities) is very hot and Heru Kane put it in very eloquent/hot/suggestive words. Thank you for continuing the story.
10/3/20, 10:54 PM
Well, normally, in a story the act of making a guy a whore causes things to be unbelievable but I can totally see Michael providing the full special at the shop that is basically him sucking cock or getting fucked. Ooh, maybe make it so he doesn't consider it as him being a whore but rather some other masculine thing that could have the men who come by amused and such. But yeah, I think Michael going all sexy time online would be fine. I also agree with the one poster who is sad that he left the team, cause taking over a team is super hot. That said there is always the potential of taking over the jocks at the gym. hehe I still think having Bob be a boyfriend figure is not exactly a realistic thing. Maybe you could make the second son the boyfriend figure. I do think, like the one poster suggested, that it shouldn't be just Dan and Bob and Dan and Michael and Dan and the second son but all four having fun together, though in different ways. I think bringing forth more of Michael's jock and bro tendencies could be fun. He isn't super intelligent anyway so having him focus on gym work and online porn and then the special work at the shop would work well for him. He isn't gay, he is a bro, and its totally logical for bros to like the muscles of bros and also as a jock he needs all the protein he can get, and what better source then from cocks.
10/3/20, 10:46 PM
****Loved this story and hope it's only the first part of more!
10/3/20, 10:36 PM
@Erratic 101. Don't you worry, I want to explore more about Bob dynamics with his sons soon. I think you'll like it. @Musclerider. Thanks for your suggestions. TBH I don't know if I could fit those perfectly to the story, but I can guarantee that those muscle wouldn't be wasted. I think it's hot that Bob continues to be the domestic muscle slave (as Erratic101 said) so let's wait to see how Dan would put Michael to work. @Heru Kane. I agree with you, it wouldn't be fair make Bob the the lowest in the family, Michael has a lot of dues to pay. And what's wrong with being a whore in the physical?. I think that Michael's full special service at the workshop would be a great business! ;) Thanks for your comment, I always enjoy reading your input. @Vulcan. I agree. Why conform with only one if you can get three slaves? @BobbyBlobfish. I want to go by different routes with every member so I think that Bob falling in love with Dan would be fun, isn't it? About Michael, he needs therapy a lot! Maybe making him docile and obedient would help him with his anger. @NZDom. Thanks for your comment. I think it would be fun to rearrange the family. Dan would be a perfect stepdad for Michael and Dell, he surely would teach them some manners. Also what better than a muscle bear as his devoted trophy wife. @Udems. The whole family have some financial struggles, I think that money would be great! ;) Thanks for your reminder! I wanted to add the name of the stories as a recommendation but I totally forgot. (I hope that my short summaries make justice to the stories) The werewolf and the nerd its "Nate and Dave" by Nacho. The twink creating his perfect daddy it's "The Cuckoo's Call" by Lord and Master in London. And finally the straight man brainwashed by his roommate it's "Tailor-Made Twink" by Daisy I. B. de Melcker
10/3/20, 9:51 PM
is this story done or is there another part?
10/3/20, 9:50 PM
I do want Bob as the boyfriend but dont forget his bitching and house duties! About the Michael, make him open that site to earn money for Dan. Its sad that he quited the sport club, I would have loved for you to control his coach on the future :P Btw. Whats the name of that story you mentioned? The one that's about a twink implanting memories to a man to create his perfect dilf?
Lusty Stallion
10/3/20, 9:45 PM
What a atory man! So much to love about it.
Lusty Stallion
10/3/20, 9:19 PM
Thanks anon. That's a really helpful critique. I guess theres some unexplored areas here & I'm gonna write your suggestion into the next one man. Nothing wrong wuth being fat or single and my apologies to any reader who was offended by my unitentional portrayal there. It's always handy to have an outside view. A fate for Workee perhaps?
10/3/20, 9:14 PM
Didn't know we had so many avid authors and readers in DC! Great work!