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10/3/20, 10:46 PM
****Loved this story and hope it's only the first part of more!
10/3/20, 10:36 PM
@Erratic 101. Don't you worry, I want to explore more about Bob dynamics with his sons soon. I think you'll like it. @Musclerider. Thanks for your suggestions. TBH I don't know if I could fit those perfectly to the story, but I can guarantee that those muscle wouldn't be wasted. I think it's hot that Bob continues to be the domestic muscle slave (as Erratic101 said) so let's wait to see how Dan would put Michael to work. @Heru Kane. I agree with you, it wouldn't be fair make Bob the the lowest in the family, Michael has a lot of dues to pay. And what's wrong with being a whore in the physical?. I think that Michael's full special service at the workshop would be a great business! ;) Thanks for your comment, I always enjoy reading your input. @Vulcan. I agree. Why conform with only one if you can get three slaves? @BobbyBlobfish. I want to go by different routes with every member so I think that Bob falling in love with Dan would be fun, isn't it? About Michael, he needs therapy a lot! Maybe making him docile and obedient would help him with his anger. @NZDom. Thanks for your comment. I think it would be fun to rearrange the family. Dan would be a perfect stepdad for Michael and Dell, he surely would teach them some manners. Also what better than a muscle bear as his devoted trophy wife. @Udems. The whole family have some financial struggles, I think that money would be great! ;) Thanks for your reminder! I wanted to add the name of the stories as a recommendation but I totally forgot. (I hope that my short summaries make justice to the stories) The werewolf and the nerd its "Nate and Dave" by Nacho. The twink creating his perfect daddy it's "The Cuckoo's Call" by Lord and Master in London. And finally the straight man brainwashed by his roommate it's "Tailor-Made Twink" by Daisy I. B. de Melcker
10/3/20, 9:51 PM
is this story done or is there another part?
10/3/20, 9:50 PM
I do want Bob as the boyfriend but dont forget his bitching and house duties! About the Michael, make him open that site to earn money for Dan. Its sad that he quited the sport club, I would have loved for you to control his coach on the future :P Btw. Whats the name of that story you mentioned? The one that's about a twink implanting memories to a man to create his perfect dilf?
Lusty Stallion
10/3/20, 9:45 PM
What a atory man! So much to love about it.
Lusty Stallion
10/3/20, 9:19 PM
Thanks anon. That's a really helpful critique. I guess theres some unexplored areas here & I'm gonna write your suggestion into the next one man. Nothing wrong wuth being fat or single and my apologies to any reader who was offended by my unitentional portrayal there. It's always handy to have an outside view. A fate for Workee perhaps?
10/3/20, 9:14 PM
Didn't know we had so many avid authors and readers in DC! Great work!
10/3/20, 7:57 PM
Really nice scene! Jason's and the Caesar's (I forgot his name, paradoxaly) stories captivate me as much as the prince's or the ongoing power changes. But it's really short... I hope it means a lot happens next chapters, at least in status quo, even if they are indeed massive changes in this one too.
NZDom
10/3/20, 7:47 PM
I like the idea of making Bob the house wife and Dan the man of the house with the boys following his every order and looking up to him. love reading your stories! thanks for writing :D
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/3/20, 5:55 PM
There are writers on this blog who are English-speaking who cannot write as well as you. You did a good job. The two or three boo-boos were more syntax and conversational than hard-core grammar. Loved it!!