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10/3/20, 2:30 PM
I've lived in DC for over a decade -- I've been to Nellie's, but not a favorite. (I'm more of an Eagle guy, except the DC Eagle is not the greatest, either.) Fun to read a story set in my city. Believe me, there are PLENTY of bottoms here.... closeted politicians, too. haha I really enjoyed the story and hope you continue.
10/3/20, 2:16 PM
I really enjoyed this!
Oct 3, 2020
10/3/20, 2:14 PM
I liked the idea but struggled to enjoy the story. There isn’t much to the characters or their changes. We see one man’s snapshot perspective of their changes, mostly focused on dick size, and don’t really get to see their lives with these new changes, just anecdotes on them. I think the ending is a bit rushed; one paragraph in which a lot happens, like a race to be finished and no real resolution.
10/3/20, 1:50 PM
@darmani posted this comment over in the POLLINATION Discussion Thread on the Forum -- I thought it worth sharing here, too: > So sad about the plane crash > Nice fucking in the woods. Hmm there are flowers unaccounted for…eh? > Feel sorry for the convenience store clerk, especially when the footage gets pulled. > The plane crash was inevitable, but that article will come into play later. The flowers in the woods scene was really fun to write! Originally, I was going to cut the scene as the pollen launched at Rugby Boy, letting Snake save him in the next scene, but I decided I needed to speed things up with these two and get them to WV faster, so I compressed it into one long scene. I like it better this way. The presence of other flowers was the detail I wanted to emerge from this segment, so I'm glad you noticed it. Willis' story at the WaWa isn't over! Come back next chapter for part 2!
10/3/20, 1:45 PM
Really great story hoping to see the grand fianale soon!
10/3/20, 12:46 PM
> Rugby boy. So hot that he doesn’t have a name. > I wasted the better part of a writing day way back in Chapter 10 trying to figure out a good name for Rugby Boy. Imagine me with my "French Names" google search putting together every variation of Jean-Luc and Jean-Paul there could possibly be. (I even looked through the athletic roster of the Quebec Rugby Union to see if I "saw" Rugby Boy.) Eventually, I just gave up on it and figured if I needed it, I would create it. Turns out, it's been a really fun ride with this character. My favorite moment comes next chapter when Rugby Boy is introduced to Sheriff Lane. > I want to be Rugby boy. > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I was in Montreal a few years ago at an outdoor coffee shop just drooling over the men as they made cigarette smoking sexy. Despite his name, Rugby Boy is a big man, for whom submission has long been a fantasy. I dig Rugby Boy, too.
10/3/20, 12:42 PM
thank you for this. please make Bob as the family's slave or just the devoted slave for Dan. thats my only request!
10/3/20, 12:36 PM
Gotta say, love this story. The site needs more stories with hairy older men, being enslaved and used.
Oct 3, 2020
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10/3/20, 12:26 PM
It would have been nice to have a little more detail with Garrett, especially given he was almost flirtatious like Kayvon by the end. Otherwise, hot obliviousness.
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10/3/20, 12:22 PM
Thanks for posting here as well, Cleancut. I hope you'll post the other stories here, too. Awesome transformation!