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10/3/20, 4:25 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've read on the site. I hope Part 2 comes soon! Also, DC person here. Loved the real place names.
10/3/20, 4:02 PM
Hmm, interesting. Okay, so I am not exactly a fan of the boyfriend thing when it comes to Bob. I am also not as much a fan of making Bob the lowest in the family, why should Michael be superior to him. That said I do like him keeping the house clean and stuff, so that was fun. The thing I found interesting here is the Michael nuances. He was planning on making online videos but was worried about men looking at him. Well, I think Dan should have him do that, but focus only on gay sites. I think Dan should have Michael focus his attention on his jock body, his gym work, and his need to show off his body. He wants to show his body, and he will want to show it off to men - as obviously only men can truly understand how great his body is. He will be thankful to Dan for being shown his true nature as a muscle boy for men. (I hope the online porn stuff stays online, don't make him a whore in the physical. Though maybe a code can be given to some local gay men so that they can get a blowjob from Michael when they take their car to be serviced at Bob's shop.) On the commands. I like the ones given to Michael. I hope his love of muscles and bodies can be enhanced. His submission when he is touched and stuff by men. Maybe an implanted desire for cum in his ass or mouth because cum is a protein and will help him be a better jock boy. On the Bob one's well, I like the role model one but the other two just have me shrug. I think Bob already thinks Dan is super sexy and such and I don't know if that is necessary. But I do think Bob thinking that everything Dan does is good, right, natural would be great. Good, development chapter. Looking forward to seeing Michael go all muscle slut. hehe PS. Loved the rimming hint at the end, would love to rim a dude who is all out of it in trance. hehe
10/3/20, 3:29 PM
agreed with muscleruder. since he already started with the chores too, pretty nice to have a muscular domestic slave around the house!
Anonymous
10/3/20, 3:10 PM
Surely a reality warper has done their work nearby, for I am compelled to click on any Nutiper story I see.
10/3/20, 2:51 PM
Absman....I live in central NH. So many Canadian truck drivers at rest areas. Come on up and we'll get busy. And bring some plants.
Musclerider
10/3/20, 2:49 PM
Yes please make Bob the dedicated sex-slave/boyfriend. Then you could turn Michael into the manual labor slave! His job being mainly to carry Dan around, or pull a rickshaw, basically be the perfect muscle horse for the increasingly lazy Dan.
10/3/20, 2:30 PM
I've lived in DC for over a decade -- I've been to Nellie's, but not a favorite. (I'm more of an Eagle guy, except the DC Eagle is not the greatest, either.) Fun to read a story set in my city. Believe me, there are PLENTY of bottoms here.... closeted politicians, too. haha I really enjoyed the story and hope you continue.
10/3/20, 2:16 PM
I really enjoyed this!
Oct 3, 2020
10/3/20, 2:14 PM
I liked the idea but struggled to enjoy the story. There isn’t much to the characters or their changes. We see one man’s snapshot perspective of their changes, mostly focused on dick size, and don’t really get to see their lives with these new changes, just anecdotes on them. I think the ending is a bit rushed; one paragraph in which a lot happens, like a race to be finished and no real resolution.
10/3/20, 1:50 PM
@darmani posted this comment over in the POLLINATION Discussion Thread on the Forum -- I thought it worth sharing here, too: > So sad about the plane crash > Nice fucking in the woods. Hmm there are flowers unaccounted for…eh? > Feel sorry for the convenience store clerk, especially when the footage gets pulled. > The plane crash was inevitable, but that article will come into play later. The flowers in the woods scene was really fun to write! Originally, I was going to cut the scene as the pollen launched at Rugby Boy, letting Snake save him in the next scene, but I decided I needed to speed things up with these two and get them to WV faster, so I compressed it into one long scene. I like it better this way. The presence of other flowers was the detail I wanted to emerge from this segment, so I'm glad you noticed it. Willis' story at the WaWa isn't over! Come back next chapter for part 2!