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10/3/20, 1:45 PM
Really great story hoping to see the grand fianale soon!
10/3/20, 12:46 PM
> Rugby boy. So hot that he doesn’t have a name. > I wasted the better part of a writing day way back in Chapter 10 trying to figure out a good name for Rugby Boy. Imagine me with my "French Names" google search putting together every variation of Jean-Luc and Jean-Paul there could possibly be. (I even looked through the athletic roster of the Quebec Rugby Union to see if I "saw" Rugby Boy.) Eventually, I just gave up on it and figured if I needed it, I would create it. Turns out, it's been a really fun ride with this character. My favorite moment comes next chapter when Rugby Boy is introduced to Sheriff Lane. > I want to be Rugby boy. > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I was in Montreal a few years ago at an outdoor coffee shop just drooling over the men as they made cigarette smoking sexy. Despite his name, Rugby Boy is a big man, for whom submission has long been a fantasy. I dig Rugby Boy, too.
10/3/20, 12:42 PM
thank you for this. please make Bob as the family's slave or just the devoted slave for Dan. thats my only request!
10/3/20, 12:36 PM
Gotta say, love this story. The site needs more stories with hairy older men, being enslaved and used.
Oct 3, 2020
Anonymous
10/3/20, 12:26 PM
It would have been nice to have a little more detail with Garrett, especially given he was almost flirtatious like Kayvon by the end. Otherwise, hot obliviousness.
Anonymous
10/3/20, 12:22 PM
Thanks for posting here as well, Cleancut. I hope you'll post the other stories here, too. Awesome transformation!
Anonymous
10/3/20, 12:18 PM
AMAZING! I love your works so much!
10/3/20, 9:42 AM
I loved the story. should do a sequel
boi98229
10/3/20, 9:17 AM
Great start to a very arousing story! i agree with everyone's wonderful comments. i love all your stories, but have by now unfortunately read them all! :(( ...except the next chapters for this story! Off to the next!
boi98229
10/3/20, 8:43 AM
Loved it! i tend to be a bit of a moral prude, so was somewhat concerned at first that i would not like a storyline in which Alex was just taking advantage of Dan. Of course the ending largely confirmed this suspicion, but as my own training is teaching me to be ever more submissive, obedient, and now more pliable and docile, this ending didn't really bother me. After all being used, providing pleasure, and making a Master's life better is the whole purpose of slave training and the sole source of the slave's happiness. And i do believe that Alex has more motive than just getting a financially better life. Actually i kind of fell in love with Alex so was willing to overlook what others might see as his shortcomings.