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10/3/20, 1:50 PM
@darmani posted this comment over in the POLLINATION Discussion Thread on the Forum -- I thought it worth sharing here, too: > So sad about the plane crash > Nice fucking in the woods. Hmm there are flowers unaccounted for…eh? > Feel sorry for the convenience store clerk, especially when the footage gets pulled. > The plane crash was inevitable, but that article will come into play later. The flowers in the woods scene was really fun to write! Originally, I was going to cut the scene as the pollen launched at Rugby Boy, letting Snake save him in the next scene, but I decided I needed to speed things up with these two and get them to WV faster, so I compressed it into one long scene. I like it better this way. The presence of other flowers was the detail I wanted to emerge from this segment, so I'm glad you noticed it. Willis' story at the WaWa isn't over! Come back next chapter for part 2!
10/3/20, 1:45 PM
Really great story hoping to see the grand fianale soon!
10/3/20, 12:46 PM
> Rugby boy. So hot that he doesn’t have a name. > I wasted the better part of a writing day way back in Chapter 10 trying to figure out a good name for Rugby Boy. Imagine me with my "French Names" google search putting together every variation of Jean-Luc and Jean-Paul there could possibly be. (I even looked through the athletic roster of the Quebec Rugby Union to see if I "saw" Rugby Boy.) Eventually, I just gave up on it and figured if I needed it, I would create it. Turns out, it's been a really fun ride with this character. My favorite moment comes next chapter when Rugby Boy is introduced to Sheriff Lane. > I want to be Rugby boy. > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I was in Montreal a few years ago at an outdoor coffee shop just drooling over the men as they made cigarette smoking sexy. Despite his name, Rugby Boy is a big man, for whom submission has long been a fantasy. I dig Rugby Boy, too.
10/3/20, 12:42 PM
thank you for this. please make Bob as the family's slave or just the devoted slave for Dan. thats my only request!
10/3/20, 12:36 PM
Gotta say, love this story. The site needs more stories with hairy older men, being enslaved and used.
Oct 3, 2020
Anonymous
10/3/20, 12:26 PM
It would have been nice to have a little more detail with Garrett, especially given he was almost flirtatious like Kayvon by the end. Otherwise, hot obliviousness.
Anonymous
10/3/20, 12:22 PM
Thanks for posting here as well, Cleancut. I hope you'll post the other stories here, too. Awesome transformation!
Anonymous
10/3/20, 12:18 PM
AMAZING! I love your works so much!
10/3/20, 9:42 AM
I loved the story. should do a sequel
boi98229
10/3/20, 9:17 AM
Great start to a very arousing story! i agree with everyone's wonderful comments. i love all your stories, but have by now unfortunately read them all! :(( ...except the next chapters for this story! Off to the next!