I just read the first two chapters in one go. I was laughtfing during so much of it. Wasn't the most hot story, but dang it you still do some of the best written!!! It's so fun to read and really creative!!!

Gute Nacht dem Autor. Sehr gut Idee. Selten so Interessantes gelesen und Teile davon hab ich selbst so "gedacht". J.J.Z.

Absolutely amazing. Would love to see the Chop Shop take on a more fem clientele. Maybe give Colt a bottom to play with!

I just gotta say — asides from how *fun* and *cute* and *hot* this is, and also how much I'm so charmed by this concept of a whole secret server populated entirely by hypno-obsessed twinks swapping hypno-tips with each other — I also *love* the way the formatting is executed. Having the podcast-induced thoughts show up within their own mental dialogue as **red programming text** is brilliant, and so so effective.

Thanks for the info guys. I have to agree with Heru Kane, I don't think it totally fits with the story. The rank system on this story it's created by Bob's views. He believes that the world works around men, but there's Alphas and betas (I don't think I need to explain much about this) . Below them are bitches (aka women) and last there's fags. Maybe I could explore about omegas in another story, but tbh I like the Brave new world's system better (Alphas to epsilons)

When most people talk about Alpha/Omega they are talking about a strong dominant top alpha male and a submissive bottom omega lover. This is often seen in male pegnancy stories where the omega can give birth. This doesn't really fit this story, like at all.

It's a very fun, chill, low stakes story. It is well written and I got a pretty good idea of these characters from just one chapter. Its also self contained but it could also get a follow up which I personally would love since I really like the way this is written and the character dynamics and I'm interested to see how many boundaries are Lee and Jesse willing to Push and where their relationship might go; as well as the presence of Devin. Overall, it's good and fun, an easy and very pleasant read and the writing is very satisfying as well, I would wanna see more of your work or perhaps a follow up to this story.

Well, for the Alpha-Omega-Beta stuff, there are multiple versions. It's based on outdated belief about how animals packs work. In those studies, being the beta is actually not that bad. The beta is often the mate or second-in-command of the Alpha. For the Omega, they are two versions: lowest level, "court jester", easily abandoned, no power in hierarchy, submissive to everyone else. Given the fact that Beta in your story fill the submissive role, it probably won't work. Also, all of the old studies were based on packs composed of unrelated wolf, witch led to more violent behavior between individuals than in nature. The other way an Omega is represented is as a self-reliant wolf without actual pack. Sometimes studies said it was because the Omega was banned and packs hated them. Others say the Omega wolf is actually respected. Urban dictionary: *"A confident and capable male that doesn't seek approval or abide by social hierarchy. He sets his own goals, and defines his own success."* *"The polar opposite of the Alpha Male. Omega Males can have friends and close acquaintances but prefer to accomplish things on their own without the help of a group. Omega Males generally don't belong to any cliques and have no desire to be the leader or most outstanding of said clique. Omega Males have relations with people from all groups and carry a resourcefulness and cunning (sometimes strength) to get a job done with their own skill. This being said, an omega male can have great pride without it manifesting as "ego." (There are always exceptions.)* *An Alpha Male MUST absolutely be perceived by his peers as the toughest, most popular, and smartest. An Omega Male cares little for this recognition...but knows that he is all those things and more.* *Alpha males must have the support of his "boys." This can be the foundation for many shallow and superficial relationships. An Omega Male needs support from time to time, but has few true friends who know him intimately and generally shuns shallow acquaintances*. " Both use of the Omega term in scientific studies is now considered dated, but the more you know, I guess. Also, combined with the previous ideas about Dell, having him and Dan being gay equals but Bob and Michael obeying only Dan as their one and only alpha. I find the idea of the second brother being okay with all of this fascinating. Never would have thought of it. Albeit if you had something else planned, don't force yourself to change your plans. -Okay, so I searched, and the Alpha as masculine and Betas as weak and submissive come from sexist belief and refer to human male behavior, while, as I remembered, Alpha/Beta/Omega refer to the appliance of the wolf pack old beliefs applied to human individuals, especially in stuff like Teen Wolf or fanfics.

Spectacular

AMAZING 2nd chapter. very hot.