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10/1/20, 11:50 AM
Genuinely nice transformation story! You spend a lot of time at the beginning describing characters that never appear or have anything to do with the plot. I think it would be better if the lecture hall WEREN'T full of stunners, rather really plain-looking nobodies, so that when the transformed Roy appears, he stands out all the more. (Although I like that the narrator finds the teacher hot.) (I had to Google what a French Crop looked like -- find the old man...)
10/1/20, 11:38 AM
this is my favorite story
10/1/20, 9:26 AM
this is great especially for a first story. keep it up!
10/1/20, 8:09 AM
Now. This. a delight to read. the one of the to p tier worldchange stories. if this continues my guess? are either aliens or tech gone wrong. it might also been a wish. because the nature of the story it makes me invested in the characters and not just for sexual purpose. if you continue please give us a definite answer on the dangling plot threads
10/1/20, 6:08 AM
SO HOT. I thought this story was a one-off, but so happy it's a series
10/1/20, 5:46 AM
is there going to be a 2nd part?
10/1/20, 5:16 AM
Interesting story I can't wait to see if theres a 2nd part
10/1/20, 4:25 AM
They definitely are a cute couple together; Nacho seems to have the cute couple act down pat. I may have to borrow from these two and Mike and Pine when I decided to create some romantic couples in my stories.
10/1/20, 4:19 AM
i want to know more!
10/1/20, 4:16 AM
Very hot beginning! I look forward to more chapters.