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9/30/20, 7:56 PM
awesome buildup and execution. makes me actually envious of dan! :-)
9/30/20, 7:33 PM
Easily one of the best stories for this Challenge. Well done. Kind of like a non-violent, sexy version of The Screwfly Solution. I can't help but wonder what happens to the women, though.
9/30/20, 6:14 PM
Nice story HL! I'm not into werewolves, but the scene was so detailed and well-written I couldn't wait to see what was coming next. Great work man! Hope to see another chapter
9/30/20, 5:47 PM
This is incredible! Definitely my favorite Pandemic story so far. The slow mental transformation is expertly captured in the writing (I love how Eric gradually starts describing the men in more complimentary terms), and the strange "letter jumble" effect was a cool tactic. It made me feel like the virus really was slowly peeking through. Great stuff!
9/30/20, 5:22 PM
I want to know the same as Bobby. I kind of want them not to be working with each other but it's just an unexpected thing from Travis's perspective that he just went with.
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9/30/20, 5:04 PM
A very well written and clever take on the pandemic theme. This has been my favourite writing challenge and i'm glad to see more stories coming through.
9/30/20, 4:51 PM
@little tiny tim. It would be hot, walking in another people shoes could give him a little bit of empathy. @Heru Kane. I had already some ideas about Dell's arc, but I have plenty of time to see how I could make it work.
9/30/20, 4:41 PM
awwwww,they are so sweet. and I really liked the freezing/posing aspect
9/30/20, 4:38 PM
- Anon - I’m more curious about the other son. I honestly would hope to see some kind of twist with him. Maybe he’s like Bob is now, pretending to be an Alpha only around others, but is already a Beta deep down? Maybe he’s gay or bi? Something that makes him stand distinctly apart from the other two. - Can I second this. Like seriously, I would love stuff like this. Him already being a beta would be cool. Him being gay or bi would be awesome. Him actually pretending to be this macho straight alpha would be even better. Maybe he sees what Dan has done to his father and brother and finds it sexy - like fuck yeah, take that! We already have the homophobes and so there being one who is not kind of sounds hot.
9/30/20, 4:32 PM
COME-ON-BRO !!...HAVEN'T WE WAITED LONG ENOUGH FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER ??? I'v searched every day for the next part of your story [& I'm not even usually into 'weight gain stories'....but I'v found yours especially erotic !!!