Recent Comments

9/30/20, 4:26 PM
I would love to see Dan make Michael into a complete stereotype of a 100% complete FAGGOT !!! Give Michael a 'limp wrist', a lisp, a 'nelly walk' : the whole works !!! TURN MICHAEL INTO A TOTAL 'OUEER-FAGGOT-BITCH',...it will serve him right !!!
9/30/20, 4:03 PM
Thanks for your comments again! @Udems. I'm not very familiar with the term Omega in this context, so I would love to read more about it :) @Anon. Dell's story arc is still a little far, but I agree, I can play a little more with his background ;) @Sexcrab. First of all, amazing name, it cracks me a little! I think it's funny... unless it's your real name. Thanks for your comment. I can relate to being lacking in motivation by not being an English native speaker, but I guess by the comments that I’m doing a decent job so far (or at least mediocre, lol) so I will keep writing. And last, I love your suggestions, I’m still trying to fully figure out Michael’s story arc. :)
9/30/20, 3:14 PM
So excited to read this! Hope you're working on chapter two! Grats and thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
9/30/20, 3:07 PM
Excellent
9/30/20, 2:53 PM
A very well written and hot story. I liked the story's scientific approach to the world change.
Anonymous
9/30/20, 2:30 PM
Parts of the buildup were very hot and the story was competently written, but the ending definitely left a bad taste in my mouth.
9/30/20, 1:16 PM
This might be my favorite Pandemic story yet. I loved the suspense and the narrator's slowly changing perceptions.
9/30/20, 12:21 PM
hey, guys, there is such thing as sperm donation and Artificial insemination, it can keep huamn race from dying
Anonymous
9/30/20, 12:20 PM
this was a much better version of pontypool tbqh
Anonymous
9/30/20, 10:46 AM
This story was just straightforward, and simple. It was sweet and well written. I *really* enjoyed this one. Good job