Recent Comments

Sexcrab
9/30/20, 8:26 AM
Finally, I could read Summers' House again! My last days were so busy and I finally I finally have time to read your story and post a comment. English is not my native language either, which reinforced my lack of motivation to write here. But it's all over! And I am not disappointed, more than that, I think your story is getting more and more interesting. Some points: The biggest suggestion I have is to find a way for Michael not to be a 100% carbon copy of his father. Everyone's relationship with Dan is a good start: Michael seems more immature, impulsive and cruel than his father, the type who takes pleasure in being violent. So maybe to suggest that Michael fear Dan to some degree? Another suggestion that would be really cool is that when Michael starts to be submissive to Dan, he fears his father's reaction anyway, accepting to be his secret bitch. And the same obviously happening with Bobby. Conclusion: Dan with two hot homophobic males submitting to Dan and one afraid that the other will discover his dirty secret.
Lee
9/30/20, 8:09 AM
I live to serve the Virus
9/30/20, 6:52 AM
Love the focus on SMELL.
9/30/20, 5:47 AM
I audibly "Aawwwed" when he gave Nate the locket and read what was inside. I'm really glad this isn't a one sided relationship either, and that they both have clear feelings for eachother despite the way they came together. This has been a really cute story, and I love each chapter.
Nutiper
9/30/20, 5:06 AM
I really liked the way they were both under each other's control (in different ways) without realizing! I very much enjoy stories that flip dynamics, or play around with who's controlling who. So I appreciated that aspect in particular.
Nutiper
9/30/20, 3:46 AM
Hypnothrill, I disagree. I think this story is 100% a perfect entry for the theme. I mean, it's literally a fantasy sprung out of our own pandemic-induced isolation + our own pandemic-induced omnipresence of face masks. As a story, it took two core aspects of our own pandemic experience, and it grew and exaggerated them into this dark fantasy. I respect how it managed to take cues like "face mask" and "isolation" to their illogical conclusion, and I appreciate this creative approach to the theme.
9/30/20, 3:10 AM
Such a sweet chapter!
Robodrone
9/29/20, 11:52 PM
This fits my needs for a pandemic theme, because having been masked now for so damned long, and de-rubbered as well, if someone sent me a rubber mask in the mail? Hells Bells i would have had it on *before* i got to the mirror! No questions asked! And that would have been my story as well. Im more of a rubber drone / android / robot dreamer myself, but i would not complain about Smokepig's results! Beggars cant be choosers they say. Just Choose me! RbD.
9/29/20, 9:45 PM
This was a long installment. I loved it a lot! It was especially nice to see the Renegade crews interacting as much as they did, and I'm glad Cory is finally giving his dad a chance. This is honestly the best chapter you've written so far, and I'm excited with anticipation for the. ext one.
9/29/20, 7:10 PM
Love to see a follow up of 19 as the gentleman's care-giver