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9/29/20, 2:01 AM
this is so good
9/29/20, 1:25 AM
I live to serve the virus
9/29/20, 1:11 AM
i live to serve the virus
9/28/20, 6:09 PM
More, please. Really enjoying watching Ian's descent into total submission ... and conversion.
9/28/20, 6:05 PM
Thanks for your comments guys. @Kelly. I wanted to see how people reacted to the panties and so far I see its good. Maybe we can see more of that later. @ForgottenCraddle. Yes, Michael it's younger version of Bob. So he isn't only a bigot but also very cocky and impulsive. @TimDrake22. Like I said before, I want to explore something different with every member of the family. Very good suggestions. @BobbyBlobfish. I agree, I think Dan would go for the safer choice and first get Michael on his hands but a little bit of fun wouldn't hurt. @Heru Kane. I feel that with Bob I didn't write him fully as I wanted so with Michael I tried to go a little further and it worked. I'm kind of glad with that, I think that having three characters with the same type of personality and background would be boring. Now with Michael I can go further without regret :) About his working life. I like to keep some struggles with the characters so they feel motivated to change. I don't think Dan will be on that situation forever.
9/28/20, 5:39 PM
So I much prefer Lee in charge as the gay man so the turn around element of Jesse also using hypnosis was not fun for me. Buuuut I really liked the nature of this story. I especially liked them hypnotizing the friend, though I think having more fun with him would be good. This is a good story, very sexy.
9/28/20, 5:37 PM
So, you really wanted me to hate Michael, kay, you achieved it, he is now hated. Which means him becoming and even more subby, bottom, moaning bitch works for me quite a lot. I mean I still want him to be a man (I am not at all into feminization) but I wouldn't mind him being very very slutty among the family, maybe even pet-like. I could totally see him wearing panties lol. I like the ideas of making him enjoy being hypnotized, making him respect dan, and making him think there is nothing wrong with males having sex with males, its after all 'boys having fun' or something like that. Oh, by the way, can you not make his work life suck. I ask that because if you do I will have great urge to ask for him to use his video on his boss at work to get a subby boss and that might take the story in a different direction. That said, there is totally nothing wrong with him finding a way to get his boss into trance. Speaking of things maybe he can learn that Bob's work isn't doing so well and then he can try and find a way that boosts it without causing problems, maybe he can realize that a financially secured Bob will make his own life all the better and such.
9/28/20, 5:12 PM
HUm, can't wait to see what revelations Michael gonna have, or what it think it mean... I mean, Dan's has a good plan, but they are plenty other ways he might get Michael. For the suggestions, to start, probably has the "watch the videos, they're cool", something about respect for Dan and perhaps something that makes him oblivious to what his dad and Dan do.
Sep 27, 2020
9/28/20, 3:47 PM
very hot and very sweet!
9/28/20, 3:25 PM
Really hoping you could continue this series. It is very hot to read.