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9/28/20, 5:37 PM
So, you really wanted me to hate Michael, kay, you achieved it, he is now hated. Which means him becoming and even more subby, bottom, moaning bitch works for me quite a lot. I mean I still want him to be a man (I am not at all into feminization) but I wouldn't mind him being very very slutty among the family, maybe even pet-like. I could totally see him wearing panties lol. I like the ideas of making him enjoy being hypnotized, making him respect dan, and making him think there is nothing wrong with males having sex with males, its after all 'boys having fun' or something like that. Oh, by the way, can you not make his work life suck. I ask that because if you do I will have great urge to ask for him to use his video on his boss at work to get a subby boss and that might take the story in a different direction. That said, there is totally nothing wrong with him finding a way to get his boss into trance. Speaking of things maybe he can learn that Bob's work isn't doing so well and then he can try and find a way that boosts it without causing problems, maybe he can realize that a financially secured Bob will make his own life all the better and such.
9/28/20, 5:12 PM
HUm, can't wait to see what revelations Michael gonna have, or what it think it mean... I mean, Dan's has a good plan, but they are plenty other ways he might get Michael. For the suggestions, to start, probably has the "watch the videos, they're cool", something about respect for Dan and perhaps something that makes him oblivious to what his dad and Dan do.
Sep 27, 2020
9/28/20, 3:47 PM
very hot and very sweet!
9/28/20, 3:25 PM
Really hoping you could continue this series. It is very hot to read.
9/28/20, 2:48 PM
great as always!!! i cannot wait for the follow-up
9/28/20, 2:47 PM
wow man seriously i really like where the story goes man. good work. i think for michael you should try something different. maybe make him more like a little girl, or make him forget who he is. but overall i like your direction.
9/28/20, 2:37 PM
I want my own company of brutes now
9/28/20, 2:13 PM
Michael seems to be an even bigger a-hole than Bob. I can't wait to see what's coming for him
9/28/20, 1:17 PM
Excellent chapter! love how Dans mind is working, & the panties are an exciting aspect to this Alpha. Well done!
9/28/20, 11:06 AM
Insanely hot - the dialoge, pacing, descriptions - everything well done!