Recent Comments

9/28/20, 2:47 PM
wow man seriously i really like where the story goes man. good work. i think for michael you should try something different. maybe make him more like a little girl, or make him forget who he is. but overall i like your direction.
9/28/20, 2:37 PM
I want my own company of brutes now
9/28/20, 2:13 PM
Michael seems to be an even bigger a-hole than Bob. I can't wait to see what's coming for him
9/28/20, 1:17 PM
Excellent chapter! love how Dans mind is working, & the panties are an exciting aspect to this Alpha. Well done!
9/28/20, 11:06 AM
Insanely hot - the dialoge, pacing, descriptions - everything well done!
9/28/20, 8:13 AM
Loved it! Can’t wait to see what else this genie gets up to!
9/28/20, 5:38 AM
I agree that there are some fun ideas in this, reminded me of the classic "Making the Band" https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/98 Storytelling choices aside, what I was most confused by was the repeated point of "transfer smarts from his brain to his balls" Um, what? Is this thinking with your dick? Is this brain matter is used to make semen? Either way, immediately after you say your character regains his intelligence which defeats whatever you're going for.
9/28/20, 4:51 AM
Thank you all :). I appreciate it! I was looking forward to giving PB some history. He has plenty more guys to capture ;)
9/28/20, 4:50 AM
Thank you, I really wasn't sure what to do with the story.