Recent Comments

9/28/20, 8:13 AM
Loved it! Can’t wait to see what else this genie gets up to!
9/28/20, 5:38 AM
I agree that there are some fun ideas in this, reminded me of the classic "Making the Band" https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/98 Storytelling choices aside, what I was most confused by was the repeated point of "transfer smarts from his brain to his balls" Um, what? Is this thinking with your dick? Is this brain matter is used to make semen? Either way, immediately after you say your character regains his intelligence which defeats whatever you're going for.
9/28/20, 4:51 AM
Thank you all :). I appreciate it! I was looking forward to giving PB some history. He has plenty more guys to capture ;)
9/28/20, 4:50 AM
Thank you, I really wasn't sure what to do with the story.
Willie Cici
9/28/20, 3:54 AM
Story line suggestions welcome
9/28/20, 3:00 AM
Awesome! I never knew I needed a backstory for PB but I'm glad we got it! I really love the Pizza Boy series so much! I'm always looking forward to your stories, especially The Sandman series!
Anonymous
9/28/20, 2:59 AM
similar to some of the other folks i was kinda betting on romance because im a tremendous sap, so im hoping that even though its getting, dom-y it still ends up in the tender end of the wading pool. regardless i love the slow build, your writing style, and your sense of character! its also pretty damn hot
9/28/20, 1:16 AM
i like it. ready for the next part
9/28/20, 1:03 AM
Love the idea... I will try to write something to contribute... :)