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9/27/20, 9:56 PM
love it!!! πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ All this make me thing on many possibilities...
Sep 27, 2020
9/27/20, 9:44 PM
Fun transformation story. I'm glad they stayed in love as the BF grew
momo
9/27/20, 8:23 PM
I Live to Serve The Virus
9/27/20, 7:43 PM
Loved it, it's nice to know more about PB!
9/27/20, 7:23 PM
hot story hope there are more chapters
9/27/20, 7:03 PM
This is a great story! I love reading your work so far!
9/27/20, 6:49 PM
totally cant wait for the next chapter of this, already been bate fuel for 3 days haha very curious to see where it goes
9/27/20, 6:23 PM
A ton of great ideas here and some very sexy scenes. But I feel like the mode of storytelling could use some work. There are way too many inaction scenes, where Jackson just stands there and listens to someone deliver a lot of exposition about what's been happening. I think the story would have worked a lot better if you'd stuck with Christian at the concert, showed what happened to him, then cut back to Jackson (which would build suspense, since the reader would know exactly what kind of danger he's in by letting Christian into his apartment).
9/27/20, 6:22 PM
very well done on the story. So arousing that i even came... But i am dying to know what happens in the thanos' Avengers. But take your time if you must, I just wanna know what happens to Hawkeye...
Sam Peterson
9/27/20, 5:57 PM
BUNCH OF BULL SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!