Recent Comments

9/27/20, 6:23 PM
A ton of great ideas here and some very sexy scenes. But I feel like the mode of storytelling could use some work. There are way too many inaction scenes, where Jackson just stands there and listens to someone deliver a lot of exposition about what's been happening. I think the story would have worked a lot better if you'd stuck with Christian at the concert, showed what happened to him, then cut back to Jackson (which would build suspense, since the reader would know exactly what kind of danger he's in by letting Christian into his apartment).
9/27/20, 6:22 PM
very well done on the story. So arousing that i even came... But i am dying to know what happens in the thanos' Avengers. But take your time if you must, I just wanna know what happens to Hawkeye...
Sam Peterson
9/27/20, 5:57 PM
BUNCH OF BULL SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!
9/27/20, 5:09 PM
i loved this story. you should totally continue it.
9/27/20, 4:57 PM
i love this. can't wait for the next part.
9/27/20, 4:52 PM
i like this, it was a really hot story.
9/27/20, 4:35 PM
This story is really neat! Keep up the good work!
9/27/20, 4:22 PM
ughhh its so good. I kind of hope you're a dom top and i can send you fotos you can blackmail me with. Please sir.
9/27/20, 3:49 PM
Super hot! cant wait to see whats next.
9/27/20, 3:49 PM
Excellent story for a huge foot fetish fanatic like me. I would have loved the reward to be more foot-related (especially a huge footjob) - maybe an idea for the future? Or the 'clients' could even reward each service with a footjob that leads to inexplicable ecstasy for the servants?