Recent Comments

9/27/20, 2:47 PM
Really looking forward to seeing where this is going. Very hot so far!
9/27/20, 2:39 PM
Brilliant writing!
9/27/20, 1:20 PM
I wonder if the Bystanders will evolve ... I wonder if Callicrates will have tasks for them in the future ... I searched for the name, 'Callicrates' and found an interesting historical counterpart, 'Καλλικράτης' This reference will provide additional context for the historical Callicrates (Καλλικράτης) Engineering in the Ancient World https://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0520227824/
9/27/20, 1:12 PM
I'm so glad you continued that path! So many ways the story can go with all those new elements!!! But what do you mean by "Making my sex"?
9/27/20, 1:01 PM
arghhh... Are Travis and the master working together? This story drive me mad with anticipation!!!! So goooood!!!
Anonymous
9/27/20, 12:33 PM
great story put Superman in his place
Anonymous
9/27/20, 12:11 PM
i realised how Superman was defeated. i love the hair loss and humiliated state. a fine example of gay pride
9/27/20, 11:47 AM
I do like the story. A little bit disappointed that Harry is turning into an asshole toward Tommy, but then again I guess it makes sense given how/why the curse started
9/27/20, 11:23 AM
I hope you'll continue to write, because this story was full of great ideas and images. I feel like it was a little incoherent, in that the rules of your fictional universe seemed to shift a lot from chapter to chapter. (Where did all those other Brutes come from? Why didn't we ever see them before?) But I'm sure you'll get better at this as you keep writing!
9/27/20, 10:50 AM
> I was jerking off this morning thinking of a wrestling team getting their symbiotes... I started to chuckle thinking, “damn that absman. I’m now finding men turned to plants exciting!!” > hahahaha! When you get down to it, I wrote one series where men turn into plants, and another where men grow muscle breasts and get milked like cows, otherwise magic steroids and super powers -- it's just a mechanism, right? I try not to think about it -- the absurdity of it, I mean -- and just try to keep making it work. ALL THAT MATTERS is that your experience is a good one -- does it get you off? Does it make you think? Does it cause you to imagine? Your comment is the highest praise a writer could get. Thank you!